Recent Comments

Not into Children's lit....
10/28/16, 11:13 PM
Would make a good illustrated children's gay storybook or cartoon...However while I give the author credit for taking the time and effort to write it, I didn't find it the least bit 'sexy' or a 'turn-on' like most stories on this site & frankly felt it was totally OUT OF PLACE on Gay Spiral Mind Control...Sorry !!!
Anonymous
10/28/16, 6:52 PM
What a terrific story...great great job...thanks
Anonymous
10/28/16, 4:00 PM
This story was so imaginative and original. You may want to run a spell checker/grammar checker to give your document a go-through before you post. However ---- It goes without saying that this is the genesis of an entire series. Have fun drafting and editing the stories. You'll have fun.
Anonymous
10/28/16, 12:46 PM
Great als usual
Redbird
10/28/16, 11:13 AM
Wow. Very fun and imageitive . And no mention super sexy.
Anonymous
10/28/16, 10:06 AM
LOVED this ...
autoDream
10/27/16, 5:37 PM
Random Tist!! XD (thanks, haha) I'm just trying to finish up Chapter Two, which should explain how things work around there.
10/27/16, 5:06 PM
Welcome back, I have missed Jese ;)
Anonymous
10/27/16, 4:12 PM
I loved this story! It's just amazing! You should write many more chapters! I want to know how exactly the waiters are dressed, how custumers interact with the waiters, all. Also, would be great if you make a kind of universe where Ezra not only controls a restaurant, but an hotel too. A
Anonymous
10/27/16, 11:26 AM
So now that hynotism is over, we have to see him go to work! Who is the customer base? Are they hypnotized as well!