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autoDream
10/25/16, 8:05 PM
Hello again Carl. Yeah, I tried to get some rimming in there, but didn't give it that much love :( I guess when it happens isn't super important atm, at least not until I try to tie things together. But whatever works for the individual reader to sort of grasp where Jese's mental state might be. Judging by the fact that he doesn't much care about escaping, actually (sort of) 'decides' to return to Darryl's lap, and falls rather easily to just about any stigma, its later in the chapters. I enjoyed the POV change as well. I tested it in a few stories I wrote and never realeased, and knew it was the best route to take. Much better than missing memories!! Although I suppose a switch to 3rd person might have been okay as well. Subconscious mode!! Again, I enjoy the transition from a proper induction being needed, to almost just knowing it should be happening, so it will, and it does. A few words and a swinging pendulum cock, bam! He is out. We will see about his return. I'm sure things will come full circle.
Carl
10/25/16, 7:49 PM
Personally I see this as more happening as he is wandering about looking for Chris, rather than after him finding him and giving up after escaping. But that's probably cause I like him being taken over by the other dudes we saw in earlier segments. Hehe But I do want to double up on my statement - I love the switch to dominant pov when Jesse went under. That was really cool. He has been mentally mindfucked so many times that even acts which wouldn't have tranced him in earlier times beings him under. But yeah he needs to go to the dude who 'cares' about him and surrender to him. Hehe If I could make a request I would like to ask for some buttplay and rimming, but honestly I love this set up so much. :)
10/25/16, 7:47 PM
This marks the final chapter for this story, and there won't be any more from Sean's perspective. I've toyed with the idea of doing a parallel story from Jared's perspective, but I'm working on a new story that's designed that way from the ground up, so I think that'll be the better way to go. Still, if there's enough interest, I may consider coming back to this at some point and doing a Jared story. I've got several other things I want to get out before then, though.
Anonymous
10/25/16, 7:29 PM
I meant The Island series but really would be super happy with either one. :)
autoDream
10/25/16, 6:37 PM
Like, this part of the story line? Or the Island series?
Anonymous
10/25/16, 6:27 PM
Please tell me you'll be continuing the series? This is incredible!
Anonymous
10/25/16, 6:25 PM
Why did you stop writing ?????????? You stories are realy HOT
autoDream
10/25/16, 5:04 PM
Chapter Unknown could actually just be taken as non-cannon, but I'm sure it would fit somewhere after the last chapter that was released, 5. Jese finds Chris, "rescues" him, however Chris just returns to the P's of his "own" will and Jese is like screw this, and screw this Island. And so some guy decides to screw him, lol.
Oct 25, 2016
Master C's slave
10/25/16, 4:54 PM
bow to the evil in the Leather
biguynj
10/25/16, 3:51 PM
Can't wait for Ashley to go through the other stations at the barn Excellent beginning