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Oct 24, 2016
Anonymous
10/26/16, 4:19 AM
The power bottom character, ugh, I didn't know I needed that.
Anonymous
10/26/16, 12:33 AM
So far so good! Looking forward to what happens next.
Carl
10/26/16, 12:02 AM
The dominant pov was perfect, makes he wish we saw it in the others. Hehe The way the hypnosis was so quick was perfect. As you said, it's been happening so much his resistance is basically gone. It's so quick. :)
Anonymous
10/26/16, 12:00 AM
This seems more like a side event that could happen but I'd not official. Mostly because him being broken down seems like a task one of the others should do. Quite sexy though.
10/25/16, 10:52 PM
Due to site rules. Regarding my own stories, I asked for them to be removed as I personally don't want to contribute to a site who's rules I don't agree with.
Anonymous
10/25/16, 10:10 PM
Poor Malcolm,I would have tanken him home :)
10/25/16, 9:49 PM
Gads, I've read this chapter at least 5 times - it is so incredibly hot. Please have a wonderful continuation befitting the marvelous build-up you have created!
Oct 25, 2016
Anonymous
10/25/16, 9:19 PM
really really good!!! hopefully will be my new favorite series!
Oct 24, 2016
Sanchezinc
10/25/16, 9:05 PM
Well I do believe there is some MC. It's being done by conditioned stimulus. Much like Pavlov's dog. It might not be a high lever MC, but it is an instinctive level MC, which seems more primal. Still very hot. I also like the power bottom control, that's hardly ever seen. Great job!
autoDream
10/25/16, 8:05 PM
Hello again Carl. Yeah, I tried to get some rimming in there, but didn't give it that much love :( I guess when it happens isn't super important atm, at least not until I try to tie things together. But whatever works for the individual reader to sort of grasp where Jese's mental state might be. Judging by the fact that he doesn't much care about escaping, actually (sort of) 'decides' to return to Darryl's lap, and falls rather easily to just about any stigma, its later in the chapters. I enjoyed the POV change as well. I tested it in a few stories I wrote and never realeased, and knew it was the best route to take. Much better than missing memories!! Although I suppose a switch to 3rd person might have been okay as well. Subconscious mode!! Again, I enjoy the transition from a proper induction being needed, to almost just knowing it should be happening, so it will, and it does. A few words and a swinging pendulum cock, bam! He is out. We will see about his return. I'm sure things will come full circle.