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May 1, 2022
8/27/24, 4:09 PM
Such a great story
8/27/24, 3:34 PM
Another great chapter. Hot one for sure.
8/27/24, 3:31 PM
It's fascinating watching you slowly develop this, it's clear that you've put a lot of thought into this world as well as the characters. It's interesting seeing Ray dealing with his situation, how he's perceived by others as well as how he perceives himself. Even before the inanimate tf there's a lot going on here, like it was interesting seeing him being 'why aren't people talking to me when I'm A Jock now???' and finding it dissonant that Bryce was living in a dorm with Jocks. It's clear that his identity is something that he puts a lot of thought into and he has a fair bit tied up with the perception of being a Jock (as others do to be fair, based on how I'm interpreting the surprise at him being an engineering major). Ray is very lost in general and uni is a time of change even for those of us who weren't Daedalus students. Looking forward to seeing how he changes in all senses of the word and how things progress in general!
8/27/24, 2:22 PM
Really loved this, particularly the use of time jumps
8/27/24, 2:22 PM
One of my favorite stories ever on the site.:green_heart:
8/27/24, 2:21 PM
I love the original and I love this addition. Excited to see where it goes!
May 1, 2024
8/27/24, 1:19 PM
Hopefully, someone will continue this, because this is very well written, and there is a lot that could be done to expand on the loose threads.
8/27/24, 12:30 AM
This story really speaks to the part of me that still judges me for this kink, it's interesting because it's been a long-time since a story in this site managed to both make me horny and sad lol There are many Chekhov's guns planted in this story that depending on how they play out, will massively affect the way this story ends; like I'm surprised Rob hasn't flat out ordered Alex to obey only him, which means... Someone else might, ergo Chekhov's gun. I'm curious to see how it plays out, and I'm fascinated by how audiences have responded to Rob with such a punishing gaze and desire for comeuppance seeing as he is way less cruel than a lot of main characters on this site!

8/27/24, 1:12 PM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) I don't think Rob thinks things through. He keeps submitting to his id before telling himself that this is going to be the last time (this no need to adjust the "authority clause"). But speaking of untouched commands, Rob didn't make Alex remember he can eat normally. I have a feeling someone is going to lose their job soon...
8/27/24, 12:07 PM
Eddie: You're kidnapping orphans! Marky: Don't be silly! You can't kidnap orphans; nobody wanted them in the first place.

8/27/24, 12:16 PM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) let's say Marky will have to face the fallacy of this attitude eventually in the stories I'm planning and leave it at that, out of Gil's sons, he may be the dutiful one, but he, like his brother Hans, has his limits, and the primal beast will push him beyond his limits like he did with Hans, Pcm helped me planing mostly the North storyline and Hans' story as well

Pcm
8/27/24, 12:37 PM
@[BlindSeer0](/user/show/381024) This comment. This is perfect. I have no word.

Pcm
8/27/24, 12:38 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Excited to see where you take the story!

8/27/24, 12:50 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I will start the North story once i'm done wit the story i'm working on, Writer's block is a bitch