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cubwriter28
10/21/16, 11:30 PM
I don't normally comment, but this story was very hot! Great hypnosis.
A San Francisco Reader
10/21/16, 11:18 PM
I agree with 'A San Francisco Fan', the memory of the Re Educator should be erased from the mind of it's co-creator...It would also be 'hot', but not necessary a new idea if the professor used the machine to DUMB-DOWN the student [since this idea in other 'erotic' writers work is usually very 'sexy']....Then we could have chapters on campus next to chapters in Alex's home town, showing the various ways Rick uses the Re Educator to further his sexual & perhaps educational goals, while Alex continues to turn his town into a sick depraved place [ that many readers are looking forward to]....Also although this is a totally Gay themed story site, EdLam has done such a good job of providing 'backround' stories featuring, girls, wife's, daughters & mothers of the featured characters, it would be nice if he filled-in how Alex deals with them, [if for no other reason than to neatly tie-up their fates].....'just a thought'???
Anonymous
10/21/16, 1:58 PM
Are you still working on the story?
suitedsubmissive
10/21/16, 11:20 AM
Wow! Incredibly hot story, Sir! I love this type of transformation story...mbp, gaining, cock shrinking. I cannot get enough. Looking forward for more from you!
TheD
10/21/16, 8:13 AM
I can't wait to read more. I'm writing a genie story myself and would love your input; can I email you?
A SAN FRANCISCO FAN !!!
10/21/16, 12:34 AM
LET'S HOPE PROFESSOR RICK USE'S THE RE-EDUCATOR TO TOTALLY REMOVE THE MEMORY OF THE MACHINE FROM HIS STUDENT'S MIND, SO ALEX DOESN'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT ANYONE COMING TO GET THE RE-EDUCATOR BACK....THEN THE PROFESSOR CAN CONCENTRATE ON 'CHANGING' THE BOY'S AT THE COLLEGE & THE PROF'S NEW POWER !!!
Anonymous
10/20/16, 9:37 PM
Time for Alex to make those Cops as 'corrupt' as they were formally 'honest'..Hope their turned into totally dishonest, cruel & evil 'son's-of-bitch's', [now re-educated to think this is their proper behavior]...This would be very 'hot'....How about it Edlam ???
Oct 19, 2016
Anonymous
10/20/16, 4:50 PM
I'd like to see the Boys' transformation into pornutopia models. And of course Mr. H as well.
Master C's slave
10/20/16, 4:35 PM
did Nate get back to town, did he tell Matt what happen, did Nate go back and had sex with Matthew, or did Nate go and find that Satyr? will there be a 4th Chapter to this story.
Anonymous
10/20/16, 3:25 PM
Excellent story! It was GREAT you added the "visuals". Loved that!