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8/27/24, 2:16 AM
Really want to see this series continued!
Anonymous
8/27/24, 1:22 AM
Loving it!!!
8/26/24, 9:38 PM
"But I doubt itโ€™s for you yet", love that line! The plot thickens! And that ending!
Anon
8/26/24, 9:24 PM
Eddie has definetly lived a very difficult life here, and his ties to the arboreal are a suprising twist. But his perseverance is laudable. On the other hand, gil has kind of lost it over his grandson being stolen in his eyes and the other Wolfman aren't much better. Marky on the other hand intrigues me- he clearly genuingly believes that how they run things is better, and that any harm is a necessary sacrifice, and he's confused as to why Eddie doesn't want this, and he seems to have had a brother who was the same or similsr in thought (what happened to him I wonder?). I think that such shows that even despite the primal beasts hold in the west, some things of old still remain. That he let him go was a miracle, but with the threat of never coming back. Also, the hunt seems to definetly be a kind of ritualistic sex act simulating prey/predator dynamics which would I assume be willing for the westerners but would quickly devolve into a horror show for anybody who wasn't willing. Jason I think is ultimately a really tragic character because he literally is in the same place Collin is and to some extent gil was in. Eddie points out rightly that what's going here might be well intentioned in some twisted matter, but it is nowhere near healthy or sane. That he was able to escape is amiracle, but it's likely the Wolfman will be more enraged than ever. And Eddie lost an arm in all of this. Also, the fact that Eddie rightfully notes the grandmasters and those in power are rather terrible and that going to some other form of excess isn't good is honestly refreshing. It's so fascinating seeing how despite being of the plantfolk, Eddie has risen beyond his heritage, and isn't enslaved by it. I only hope he won't be harmed, but the wolffolk likely have a target on him now for taking Jason.
8/26/24, 9:12 PM
This is hot, I hope some fingers find their way into Lance's tight fat butt at some point ๐Ÿ˜›
8/26/24, 1:17 AM
Just reread it and I think it needs a sequel.

8/26/24, 2:27 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) How about a prequel?

8/26/24, 8:38 PM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) That sounds great!
8/26/24, 7:53 PM
i am really into hypnosis, mind control, and transformation, so needless to say i loved this story -- one of my new favorites! Pup play is not something i have tried and admit to not quite getting it, but it still somehow has a strong appeal. (Maybe i should visit this bar!) Also normally i like more detail into the methods of mind control (makes it seem more real somehow), but the description of the transformation process more than made up for it. Great story!
Anonymous
8/26/24, 7:44 PM
I think it would be interesting to imply at the ending that these newly minted tops were going to be using their cocks for something far different in the near future :smiling_imp:. But the ending was really nice as is. Seems like these men will be breeders. Thanks for the story. Wouldn't it be entirely funny if we actually had some of these products making their rounds in this reality today unbeknownst to the majority.
8/26/24, 5:40 PM
Nice beginning!! Wish the program would also accept skinny guys like me who wanted to be bulked up and perfect.

8/26/24, 6:33 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) I would think that this Facility has different way to induct men into the Program. We're just seeing the weight loss program. I'm sure there's a body building version.

8/26/24, 7:09 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) Great to know it!!