Recent Comments

Oct 19, 2016
Anonymous
10/19/16, 7:42 PM
Please turn Hargrave Academy into an athletic dumb jock school!!
Anonymous
10/19/16, 7:36 PM
Awesome
10/19/16, 7:19 PM
Fabulous! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Anonymous
10/19/16, 7:11 PM
Glad you contiinued it :)
Oct 19, 2016
Anonymous
10/19/16, 5:53 PM
It's a serious threat to our nation and humanity... lol so hot
Oct 19, 2016
Anonymous
10/19/16, 5:28 PM
Next stage -- screening. Not every one watching the video has the body or potential to be a Pornutopia star. So, the process of being selected is important. The prospective actors need to "measure up". You have to deal with the reality of your targeted future actors: 18 year olds, presumably "twinkish",
Anonymous
10/19/16, 4:57 PM
One nitpick: Brazilians speak Portuguese, not Spanish.
Oct 19, 2016
LongtimeFan
10/19/16, 4:20 PM
Hypnothrill--I've been reading this site for a few years now, but have never been compelled to comment on a story until today. This is FANTASTIC! It reminds me of my absolute favorite story on this site: your "Musclehead: Tyler's Journal." Your descriptions of the slow brainwashing, gradual dumbing down, and general himbofication of people are insanely hot. I also want to commend you on two particular things. One: your making it a point to insist that everyone in the story is of age. That means a lot--I get uncomfortable with reading about underage kids being manipulated. Two: the way you SUGGEST sex. To be honest, it's the transformation and stupefication that get me going, not graphic sex scenes. I like that your stories are full of implied sex and focus more on the fetish than the actual sex act! And finally, to your question about where to go next. On a more contained level, I'd love to see something about a group of students or employees at another business trying to resist being taken in, only to fall one by one to the DVD's power. However, on a grander scale, it would be neat to see if somehow, you could weave your stories together--that is, if the Musclehead pills, water from Bulldawg Maker gyms, baths from the massage parlor, and Pornutopia DVDs were all part of some unified scheme. They all work in different ways (pills, chemicals, direct brainwashing), so that could be fun! Again, you are my favorite author on this site, so my main suggestion is this: keep writing stories the way YOU want to. You'll always have at least one reader! Keep on keeping on! :) P.S. I need to OBEY to be a Musclehead...
Anonymous
10/19/16, 4:10 PM
Hope you'lol make a sequel!! Cody should recruit his friend for Coach.
Anonymous
10/19/16, 3:10 PM
Great chapter....excellent work