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Oct 19, 2016
LongtimeFan
10/19/16, 4:20 PM
Hypnothrill--I've been reading this site for a few years now, but have never been compelled to comment on a story until today. This is FANTASTIC! It reminds me of my absolute favorite story on this site: your "Musclehead: Tyler's Journal." Your descriptions of the slow brainwashing, gradual dumbing down, and general himbofication of people are insanely hot. I also want to commend you on two particular things. One: your making it a point to insist that everyone in the story is of age. That means a lot--I get uncomfortable with reading about underage kids being manipulated. Two: the way you SUGGEST sex. To be honest, it's the transformation and stupefication that get me going, not graphic sex scenes. I like that your stories are full of implied sex and focus more on the fetish than the actual sex act! And finally, to your question about where to go next. On a more contained level, I'd love to see something about a group of students or employees at another business trying to resist being taken in, only to fall one by one to the DVD's power. However, on a grander scale, it would be neat to see if somehow, you could weave your stories together--that is, if the Musclehead pills, water from Bulldawg Maker gyms, baths from the massage parlor, and Pornutopia DVDs were all part of some unified scheme. They all work in different ways (pills, chemicals, direct brainwashing), so that could be fun! Again, you are my favorite author on this site, so my main suggestion is this: keep writing stories the way YOU want to. You'll always have at least one reader! Keep on keeping on! :) P.S. I need to OBEY to be a Musclehead...
Anonymous
10/19/16, 4:10 PM
Hope you'lol make a sequel!! Cody should recruit his friend for Coach.
Anonymous
10/19/16, 3:10 PM
Great chapter....excellent work
Anonymous
10/19/16, 1:24 PM
Awesome...Like where this is heading. Really glad the author has picked it back up. Can't wait for new chapters, hopefully soon! :-)
Anonymous
10/19/16, 12:40 PM
Hi. I like the story, but I just want to tell you that Google Translate is highly unreliable for this language. It translates for the traditional Portuguese and not the Brasilian based version, so it's reading a bit differently than probably desired lol
Anonymous
10/19/16, 1:19 AM
Sounds like Alex has daddy issues
Anonymous
10/19/16, 1:18 AM
Pretty hot!!
Anonymous
10/19/16, 12:33 AM
Nice story...looking forward to the sequel...perhaps Buck can bottom for Joey...
Anonymous
10/18/16, 11:38 PM
I feel like there should be more to this. Like this is only the first part of the story, and the ending was added too soon. It's a lot of fun, and I would like to read more of Jack and Buster's changes.
A SAN FRANCISCO FAN !!!
10/18/16, 9:03 PM
...ALSO HOPE EDLAM FINDS THE TIME TO BRING US CHAPTER TEN [& HOPEFULLY MANY MORE] SOON....BUT PLEASE BRO, DON'T GO 'SOFT'-ON-US....REMEMBER WHAT WE'VE ALWAYS LOVED ABOUT YOUR WORK HAS BEEN YOUR DARING TO BE SO 'UN-P.C.' IN YOUR DEPICTION OF THE KIND OF 'QUEERS' & 'FAGGOT'S' ALEX HAS CREATED...JUST THE KIND OF 'KINKY',SICK & DEBAUCHED 'HOMO'S' A FORMALLY HOMOPHOBIC ASS-HOLE WOULD CREATE !! THIS IS THE DISTINCT QUALITY THAT HAS MADE YOUR FICTION SO 'HOT'....HOPE YOU KEEP-IT-UP....THOSE READERS WHO ARE LOOKING FOR SWEET, HAPPY 'LOVE-E-DOVE-E' SOLUTIONS CAN FIND THOUSAND'S OF OTHER 'POSITIVE' STORIES ON THIS AND MANY OTHER SITES....WE LOVE YOU BECAUSE ALEX'S SOCIOPATHIC IDEAS MAKE FOR GOOD SEXY READING....LOVE, LOVE, LOVE YOUR FICTION !!!