Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/18/16, 3:30 PM
Despite the humor, there is a dark side to this story. Sexy, hot, but dark.
Dadlover
10/18/16, 10:27 AM
Hey Edlam. Thanks for the good story you're giving us. It's very hot. I very much admire you doing it the way you want to and not what others do. I think it's a very respectable trait a creator of good things have. Keep it up. Hopefully the next chapter isn't as far away as the last 2 chapters lol Kisses from New Zealand xoxo
Anonymous
10/17/16, 10:54 PM
Thanks Edlam...It's great that you follow your faithful readers comments..You know we love your story & will of course accept anything you decide to do. After all your the author..However it's good to know that you haven't forgotten that Alex is a 'deranged' SOCIOPATH !! That's what makes the story so 'sexy'...Keep up the good work......
Anonymous
10/17/16, 9:59 PM
I love a good jock subliminals story, but I'm not a big fan of the jump cut from "just starting to be exposed to it" straight to "already conditioned sex toy". I want to see the *change*, what the wording of the subliminal it's, how Buck rationalizes all this, how his behavior changes incrementally. As it stands, hearing the Coach's original track was the best part of the story for me. Still, thanks man!
10/17/16, 8:12 PM
Thank you all for the great responses again! Chapter 10 is underway...just remember, despite this being an erotic gay hypnosis story, I still want it to be a good story. So, while it's fun to have Alex do what he does...doing the same thing with no changes, growth, or development would get old really fast. He's still a deranged sociopath...he's just experiencing something he's never experienced before. It'll affect him...but definitely not keep him from mind-fucking his way through the town. Comments and e-mails always welcome, my friends. Thanks again!
Anonymous
10/17/16, 8:08 PM
Alex is really getting soft with his 'feelings' for the older cop, seems a little out of character...I agree with 'Re educated fan', that some of the stories hottest's moment's came when Alex made the other characters the worst possible examples of 'queers' and empowered J.J. to be a complete 'Bully'...This was so sexy and I also wish the author would go back to some of this type of material.. Would also be interesting if Alex's earphone's slipped-off while he was making some personality changes, and they affected himself as well....
Anonymous
10/17/16, 7:46 PM
Excellent story
Willie Cici
10/17/16, 2:51 PM
Thanks for the comments. To the last point, the foreign words in the story were translated from English to Portuguese using Google Translator.
10/17/16, 12:08 PM
Really like this kind of skewed, sweet story.
Anonymous
10/17/16, 4:26 AM
Reminds me of the pharma story. Keep it up