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EdIam
10/14/16, 1:46 PM
DEFINITELY an inspiration for Alex. Watching Jessica Jones, my little perverted imagination kept hoping Kilgrave would make some men gay as hell hahaha.
polkarrty
10/14/16, 1:44 PM
edlam did you make Alex kilgrave XD
Anonymous
10/14/16, 1:40 PM
worth the wait for sure
Anonymous
10/14/16, 1:34 PM
The part about shane and bill was sad, I was hoping that at least they could be together even as a dom/sub couple. Every time a read a chapter, I think you've gone too far, but I keep returning. What does that say about me? Lol
Master C's slave
10/14/16, 1:30 PM
CHAPTER 3 PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Boon
10/14/16, 8:14 AM
Ohhhh, man!!! Ohhhh, man!!! Absolutely amazingly HOT! Thank you very very much. I love what you did with the cops, it is a wonderful chapter, and it was really hard to read it complete because it's insanely orgasmic. I thoght for a moment that you were going to show us the transformation of Alex's brothers. But you, devil, are reserving us more surprises! The opening is great, Jizzson sounds totally mindfucked and obsessed with Alex and cocks. Jizzson, Cockforbrains and Kneelsfordick are some of my favourite characters, along with JJ and Filthy Queer, is so hot when you show us their inner deformed minds. Good job in the police station, it was terrific. And I'm glad you're living aside women, the focus is on men. Leaving aside the horniness, is really surpriseng when you give emotional background to your characters. The part with Bill and Shane was sad, and the way Alex react to Bill is a highlight on this chapter, I wonder where will you leave that in the future. Was also sad to know that John Sr is becoming crazy, I hope he keep his sanity at the end. I find insanely hot when you change the name of the characters into ridiculous horny names and when you describe their new debasing thoughts about themselves. If is not asking for much, I'd love to see more sex themed names in the next instalment. And I'm dying to know what's next for Alex's brothers and father!
Re-educate me
10/14/16, 8:13 AM
Honestly, I was exhausted when I came onto the site tonight and I felt myself perk up as soon as I saw the story update. This was so good, and I managed to edge myself to the end. Edlam, you're a fantastic writer, and all I can say is thank you. (Low-key hoping Alex gets what's coming to him, tbh. But loving all the turns this has been taking.)
Anonymous
10/14/16, 4:19 AM
spamming refresh on homepage :(
svplgsmslm
10/14/16, 4:09 AM
Excellent. I might have had the attorney for the company send him a new video once a week to supplement the discovery, each one building on the week before--the first one being the trap, the others seducing him further and further until the attorney asks him to come to the office for a conference where the conditioning really begins. Mind if I try a variation one day?
10/14/16, 3:03 AM
Submitted Chapter 9! Should be up shortly...thank you all for being awesome. I'm kinda proud of this next chapter :P