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10/6/16, 8:00 PM
Thanks everyone for the responses! Zach isn't done with the story, don't worry. Though he won't visit them again for a while. There will be more bodily changes, don't worry.
Oct 3, 2016
muscledrain
10/6/16, 7:54 PM
This is a great story. Totally felt the touch of horror story at the end, like a gay version of Tales from the Crypt!
Anonymous
10/6/16, 6:53 PM
Amazing story. I absolutely love it. Just a quick question. How much of the next chapter do you have finished? I don't want to rush you, take as long as you need, I just wanna know your progress on the next chapter. Thank you so much.
Anonymous
10/6/16, 3:28 PM
I would love to read a sequel either with the hunt of Reginald Kelly or the take over of the new universe. This is one of mine favorite story of this site.
Oct 2, 2006
Anonymous
10/6/16, 9:43 AM
This is great!!
Oct 3, 2016
Anonymous
10/6/16, 9:24 AM
This kind of revenge story is wonderful, glad you felt inspired to write it. I hope to read more!
JasCo
10/6/16, 6:38 AM
Mr Cici has outdone himself.
Anonymous
10/6/16, 6:10 AM
"Yes," nodded Colin, "I need to work out in the morning. Too." The beat after "morning" is excellent. Love a great writer.
Anonymous
10/6/16, 3:30 AM
Some love gym slaves who maintain his professional skills and intelligence. Some love ones who lost them and transformed into a new life as empty-head gym rat.
Anonymous
10/5/16, 11:21 PM
I like this. The slow descent into submission is really hot. Would enjoy a view from a dominant person at some point that's for sure. That said, I do hope they don't ruin his professional life. There is great benefit to him still working and doing well out there before he goes to the gym to submit and obey.