Recent Comments

Digit
8/26/24, 7:34 AM
This has been an excellent story. I’m glad that there’s plans to continue this, as it’s such as compelling read.
8/26/24, 7:05 AM
Damm that hot.
8/26/24, 7:05 AM
Exceptional as always
8/26/24, 5:42 AM
Are you going to bring back more of your stories? I’d love to be able to read Floor 6 again!
8/26/24, 3:04 AM
Nice - I cannot wait for the next chapter
TandySensation
8/26/24, 2:27 AM
This one needs a lot of proofreading. I enjoyed the story idea, but the errors and exaggerated speech mannerisms were a distraction. Especially coming from an experienced author. It gives the impression that this is just an experimental quickie. 🤷

8/26/24, 2:31 AM
@[TandySensation](/user/show/2168216) While I appreciate this feedback I have never had much luck with someone proofing my stories without just adding their stuff in there. Or just writing it to the way they want it. I will do my best to edit this again but with my learning differences, I don't know how far it will get.

TandySensation
8/26/24, 2:49 AM
@[Drake Nightstorm](/user/show/650184) I see. That's a big reason why I've never done much proofreading/editing myself. I don't like feeling that I'm injecting my voice into someone else's work. But I could probably do it, with a bit of practice and two-way feedback with the author. I've got some learning differences myself. I apologize if I harshly criticized something that you struggle with. I'm available to help proofread, and I promise not to insert my own stuff.

8/26/24, 2:56 AM
@[TandySensation](/user/show/2168216) I just did an edit to this. I hope it helps. Actually I could take you up on that as I prefer two way communicaiton.

8/26/24, 3:02 AM
@[TandySensation](/user/show/2168216) Also we are all good here.
Anonymous
8/26/24, 2:46 AM
I remember reading the story back in the day or at least one similar to it
Jun 8, 2022
8/26/24, 2:41 AM
Kind of a hot story except for the need for insulin part.
8/26/24, 2:14 AM
It has been six year since this was posted, and it is still one of my favourites. I would love to see a sequel to this story.
8/26/24, 1:25 AM
Great story!