Recent Comments

8/26/24, 4:32 PM
Really enjoying this series - can’t wait to read the next installment!
8/26/24, 3:28 PM
Well Damn! Not at all what I'm into but I must say that was hot as hell. Perfectly paced with perfect humiliation. What a skill to make something normally so unappealing so hot. Good on you!!
HypnoSub
8/26/24, 3:12 PM
Great work with this story!
Anonymous
8/26/24, 3:00 PM
Yeppers way to go.
8/26/24, 2:37 PM
@ Neon, I'm wondering how accurate our speculations are for the next chapter? Any teasers for what's coming?
8/26/24, 1:05 PM
I like this ending, Eddie walked away relatively unharmed, also, damn, his dad was not a good man, let see who that will affect Colin in the next few parts, they are such a cute couple

Pcm
8/26/24, 1:22 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I'm glad you think so! I want you guys to get attached to Eddie first so that you can feel bad for him properly in later chapters. I also would like to point out that Eddie did lose an arm here, so maybe not entirely unscathed?

8/26/24, 1:25 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) yeah, but the primal beast didn't corrupt him, also, I think Colin can heal it, or he may gat a prosthetic of some short, it sucks, sure, but in his world, it could have been worse

Pcm
8/26/24, 1:26 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) I guess you are right. Hmm, maybe I'm being too lenient on him here after all. Will have to fix that later.

8/26/24, 1:29 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) ouch, didn't he and Colin suffer enough?

Pcm
8/26/24, 1:38 PM
@[darkblade2814](/user/show/243317) Trust me, they can suffer a lot more.

8/26/24, 2:01 PM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) I'm scared now
8/26/24, 1:42 PM
Incredible next chapter. Can’t wait for more
yeah
8/26/24, 11:16 AM
I came back to this story and realized that a lot of the images aren’t available anymore - they show up as a 502 error. Hopefully this can be fixed!

8/26/24, 1:24 PM
@[yeah](/user/show/10033386) Hi! Yeah sorry about that - it's not my doing, but the hosting site has been having a lot of issues lately. Sometimes you need to wait a minute and try again, I just tried and they all seem ok now :)
8/26/24, 1:10 PM
Hey all! I hope you're enjoying the story so far. I've read a couple of amazing suggestions and I'm sure they'll spice up the story in due course. I have a Ko-Fi page now! If you liked this story, or my writing in general, consider shouting me a cup of coffee. It does take time to write these up, and a donation can help to get stories out sooner and more consistently. https://ko-fi.com/whisperlouder Thanks again for all your kind words and support. You've made me fall in love with writing again. Stay horny, and I hope enjoyed this chapter :)
8/26/24, 1:03 AM
2 for 2. Another great story.

8/26/24, 10:05 AM
@[JockTopper](/user/show/10015286) One of my most famous. Glad you liked it.