Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/25/16, 4:00 PM
lol I thought it was THAT java master. I'm c++ master lol
Anonymous
9/25/16, 2:00 PM
Not really happy with the black guy speaking like a stereotypical '70s brother. Pulled me out of an otherwise hot story.
TimNJ
9/25/16, 11:56 AM
You wrote yet another incredible story, made all the more evocative because of the location. Years ago I used to visit a now-defunct deli right outside Grand Central and the young Mexican man who made the coffee and tea at the register was so hot, I would have handed over $500 in a heartbeat. I think he knew it too, lol.
markgraf
9/25/16, 7:00 AM
Hey good story. I enjoyed it. Thanks!
Bateriam
9/25/16, 6:42 AM
Nice job. The story grabbed me and kept me the whole way.
Master C's slave
9/25/16, 2:16 AM
where are they at? make me into an Rubber alien
Master C's slave
9/25/16, 2:15 AM
where are the aliens? come and make me into an rubber ailen
Master C's slave
9/25/16, 1:58 AM
doubtful those pictures where those MEN but story was interesting
Anonymous
9/24/16, 10:20 PM
Oh por Dios! Yo quiero contratar sus servicios! Me encanta. Que gran comienzo *___*
Mefisto
9/24/16, 10:02 PM
Oh! Es muy curioso ver por aquí una historia escrita en español. Es agradable leer algo así en la lengua de uno para varias, gracias :) Me ha encantado tu estilo narrativo y la historia en si. Eres muy detallista y original, me encanta. ¡Espero leer nuevos trabajos tuyos pronto!