Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/22/16, 1:25 PM
Really nice change of pace for you that he mostly enjoyed the changes. Great work!
Anonymous
9/22/16, 11:44 AM
This story looks more appropriated for fictionmania.tv, writing is good though.
Anonymous
9/22/16, 11:16 AM
Best writer on here.
cutlerfan
9/22/16, 10:02 AM
Great Story!
Anonymous
9/22/16, 9:10 AM
Yes, I always love you, EdIam!!!
Anonymous
9/22/16, 7:56 AM
He forgot to throw the stone back into the ocean [didn't he ???]........
Sep 19, 2016
9/22/16, 6:32 AM
Hahaha, no worries, I spent a few hours working on it earlier today. Needed to take a jerk off break lol
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/22/16, 6:26 AM
Yea edlam gets it. Although he should be writing a new chapter right about now.........
Sep 19, 2016
9/22/16, 6:12 AM
I'm happy to learn the dog only got his front paw run over and had many many puppies and a long life. Thank you for the extension of your story. I, for one, understood that that story device was used to showcase the power the main character had. Not everyone has to like it and if you don't, feel free to not read the story. But, in my opinion, you shouldn't judge those that look past it knowing that it wasn't a real dog, that if it happened in real life we'd be upset, and that, well, if pretty much 100% of the things we jerk off to here happened in real life, we'd be disgusted. Beyond everything, a story with this many comments is rare and shows that Ollie struck a cord. Good or bad, he's got people discussing...awesome. Granted, I'm a dude who is currently writing a pretty fucking evil story himself. So what do I know?
Jan 20, 2007
Anonymous
9/22/16, 6:01 AM
One of the best stories from the NCMC