Recent Comments

tomozco
9/22/16, 3:43 AM
Thanks for liking Family Matters! I will definitely get back to that series...I still have a few more parts in mind before wrapping it up, but I just wanted to take a break from it for a bit....so unfortunately that won't be for in for this month or next. I felt the creativity ran a bit flat and the write up got a bit repetitive and uninspiring, so I decided to put it aside to recharge the ideas and then get back to writing it when I've built up enough interesting ideas and plots. So do keep your eye out for it. ;)
Sep 19, 2016
D
9/22/16, 3:41 AM
It was really hard to get past the part about the dog.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/22/16, 1:26 AM
in either case, this story is fiction. That scene was fake. Its not as if someone really threw the dog under the car. if you didnt like the part you can just skip the build up and read the hot parts of the story. Why are you upset at an evil fiction character doing evil things? Its like getting upset at darth vader blowing up a planet with death star.
Anonymous
9/22/16, 12:08 AM
I agree wit most of the comments..your a good writer..However I also enjoy a much slower transformation with altered memories as well and 'clueless' is the best..a moment of reflection, than a moment of doubt, forget fullness & finally total acceptance...I agree with a few of the other comment's, enjoy feminization more on a 'sissy' level, small dick, fem. actions rather than bust enlargement & female body...Perfer thrir still a 'man' even if their now lisping, mincing, limp-wristed, pantie wearing 'boi'............
Anonymous
9/21/16, 10:56 PM
but I like Family Matters more ... That is really an excellent series! Can we expect any new chapters as well this month??
Master C's slave
9/21/16, 10:51 PM
would like to know where can i get this Mariposa?
Sep 19, 2016
Pornmax
9/21/16, 10:25 PM
Everyone ... could it be possible that those who claimed they were sick of the dog scene are actually the same person (or at most two?)? Cuz none of them left their BIG names here lol. I love all of Ollie's works ... I remember in Reality He Wrote Part 3, there was a scene where the main character played with a school gang. The gangsters were all forced to give the man a blowjob to admire him. None of them were willing, though! How horny! I really want to see more gangsters being brainwashed in his work!!!
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/21/16, 10:13 PM
Well when I watch the Sopranos and see the main character kill someone or watch Breaking Bad and see the main character poison and almost murder a small child... I guess I don't believe everyone involved in the production of that episode is sick and fantasies about murdering. The main character in this story raped and violated his neighbours, somehow I think he's not supposed to be portrayed as a nice guy. If you'd actually do that do your 20 year old neighbours in real life, you're a monster
shortnlookn@yahoo.com
9/21/16, 8:10 PM
I thought the setup, mental descriptions, and change were all amazing and very hot. My only compliant is that, like some people said, the transformation was too quick. I tend to enjoy slow changes, bit by bit, but overall it was a very well done story. Some people aren't into this level of feminization, but I enjoy exploring the boundaries found it very erotic. Can't wait for your next story
Anonymous
9/21/16, 6:57 PM
As long as you keep up the well written mental transformations (and the awkward struggle against them), it'll appeal to me, at least! if the final form appeals, that's mostly just icing. :P (I did really love the way he slowly became more attracted to his bearish friend, and the increasingly loving descriptions of his body hair and thick frame)