Recent Comments

shortnlookn@yahoo.com
9/21/16, 8:10 PM
I thought the setup, mental descriptions, and change were all amazing and very hot. My only compliant is that, like some people said, the transformation was too quick. I tend to enjoy slow changes, bit by bit, but overall it was a very well done story. Some people aren't into this level of feminization, but I enjoy exploring the boundaries found it very erotic. Can't wait for your next story
Anonymous
9/21/16, 6:57 PM
As long as you keep up the well written mental transformations (and the awkward struggle against them), it'll appeal to me, at least! if the final form appeals, that's mostly just icing. :P (I did really love the way he slowly became more attracted to his bearish friend, and the increasingly loving descriptions of his body hair and thick frame)
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/21/16, 3:43 PM
Maybe if it was as vanilla as a dog being thrown in front of a car. Once again the dog scene lasted a second. If the aristocrats joke was as small a part as the dog scene I could move on and continue reading.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/21/16, 2:21 PM
It's really odd logic to claim that since it's a mind control site that nothing is off limits. Would you get your rocks off if someone posted an Aristocrats joke (Google it) that involved gay sex?
Sep 17, 2016
9/21/16, 1:46 PM
some other ideas: 1. Some superhero addicts to organism, kidnaps Jack. 2. Jack join a superhero team, but can't properly control his power, turn a fight to an orgy. 3. Jack gone rogue and kicked all the bigot, alpha-male superheroes's butts, or secretly controlled them.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/21/16, 1:19 PM
Omg you guys are on a site where men are, against their will forced to have sex,l. And yet a dogs death really is that big a deal? Seriously it wasnt like he just killed the dog for shits and giggles. It was needed to show how strong his device was. Really pisses me off when people on THIS site get all righteous.
screamingmoist
9/21/16, 1:15 PM
Thanks for reading And for the feedback everyone! I know these sorts of TFs don't land with everyone, but based on some responses I got from some of my other stories I figured I'd put this one out there for those that are into it. I'm working on another one that I hope to have up this week or next that should have a bit broader appeal.
Anonymous
9/21/16, 11:44 AM
So good!
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/21/16, 9:08 AM
I was looking forward to reading the entirety of this story until i got to the part where the animal cruelty came in. That angered me, first of all; and secondly made me lose any interest in the story. To put such a thing as a dog being thrown under or at a vehicle is a sign of a sick mind.
Anonymous
9/21/16, 8:21 AM
Dude I love your stories , I get excited every time I see your name come up but can't say I enjoyed this one. Like don't get me wrong I love shrinking stories. Like in facet 2 but can't really get behind the breast thing with it.