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Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/22/16, 6:26 AM
Yea edlam gets it. Although he should be writing a new chapter right about now.........
Sep 19, 2016
9/22/16, 6:12 AM
I'm happy to learn the dog only got his front paw run over and had many many puppies and a long life. Thank you for the extension of your story. I, for one, understood that that story device was used to showcase the power the main character had. Not everyone has to like it and if you don't, feel free to not read the story. But, in my opinion, you shouldn't judge those that look past it knowing that it wasn't a real dog, that if it happened in real life we'd be upset, and that, well, if pretty much 100% of the things we jerk off to here happened in real life, we'd be disgusted. Beyond everything, a story with this many comments is rare and shows that Ollie struck a cord. Good or bad, he's got people discussing...awesome. Granted, I'm a dude who is currently writing a pretty fucking evil story himself. So what do I know?
Jan 20, 2007
Anonymous
9/22/16, 6:01 AM
One of the best stories from the NCMC
Anonymous
9/22/16, 6:01 AM
Oh I'm the opposite , I love a quick transformation where the user is completely aware , hence why I love the facet stories so much
tomozco
9/22/16, 3:43 AM
Thanks for liking Family Matters! I will definitely get back to that series...I still have a few more parts in mind before wrapping it up, but I just wanted to take a break from it for a bit....so unfortunately that won't be for in for this month or next. I felt the creativity ran a bit flat and the write up got a bit repetitive and uninspiring, so I decided to put it aside to recharge the ideas and then get back to writing it when I've built up enough interesting ideas and plots. So do keep your eye out for it. ;)
Sep 19, 2016
D
9/22/16, 3:41 AM
It was really hard to get past the part about the dog.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/22/16, 1:26 AM
in either case, this story is fiction. That scene was fake. Its not as if someone really threw the dog under the car. if you didnt like the part you can just skip the build up and read the hot parts of the story. Why are you upset at an evil fiction character doing evil things? Its like getting upset at darth vader blowing up a planet with death star.
Anonymous
9/22/16, 12:08 AM
I agree wit most of the comments..your a good writer..However I also enjoy a much slower transformation with altered memories as well and 'clueless' is the best..a moment of reflection, than a moment of doubt, forget fullness & finally total acceptance...I agree with a few of the other comment's, enjoy feminization more on a 'sissy' level, small dick, fem. actions rather than bust enlargement & female body...Perfer thrir still a 'man' even if their now lisping, mincing, limp-wristed, pantie wearing 'boi'............
Anonymous
9/21/16, 10:56 PM
but I like Family Matters more ... That is really an excellent series! Can we expect any new chapters as well this month??
Master C's slave
9/21/16, 10:51 PM
would like to know where can i get this Mariposa?