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Sep 17, 2016
9/21/16, 1:46 PM
some other ideas: 1. Some superhero addicts to organism, kidnaps Jack. 2. Jack join a superhero team, but can't properly control his power, turn a fight to an orgy. 3. Jack gone rogue and kicked all the bigot, alpha-male superheroes's butts, or secretly controlled them.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/21/16, 1:19 PM
Omg you guys are on a site where men are, against their will forced to have sex,l. And yet a dogs death really is that big a deal? Seriously it wasnt like he just killed the dog for shits and giggles. It was needed to show how strong his device was. Really pisses me off when people on THIS site get all righteous.
screamingmoist
9/21/16, 1:15 PM
Thanks for reading And for the feedback everyone! I know these sorts of TFs don't land with everyone, but based on some responses I got from some of my other stories I figured I'd put this one out there for those that are into it. I'm working on another one that I hope to have up this week or next that should have a bit broader appeal.
Anonymous
9/21/16, 11:44 AM
So good!
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/21/16, 9:08 AM
I was looking forward to reading the entirety of this story until i got to the part where the animal cruelty came in. That angered me, first of all; and secondly made me lose any interest in the story. To put such a thing as a dog being thrown under or at a vehicle is a sign of a sick mind.
Anonymous
9/21/16, 8:21 AM
Dude I love your stories , I get excited every time I see your name come up but can't say I enjoyed this one. Like don't get me wrong I love shrinking stories. Like in facet 2 but can't really get behind the breast thing with it.
Anonymous
9/21/16, 7:27 AM
Female attributes are just so-so...Sissy attributes might have been 'hotter', just my view, in gay transformation fiction...Sorry
Willie Cici
9/21/16, 3:52 AM
Thanks for the comments. I don't know how this could play out -- suggestions always welcome.
Anonymous
9/21/16, 3:51 AM
I'm glad someone thought this was interesting. Did nothing for me! You've done better.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/21/16, 3:50 AM
I always enjoyed reading your stories. This was hot. I could have done without dog massacre (and I'm not a dog lover). But the mind control and manipulation -- I'm still hard.