Recent Comments

Pedro
9/20/16, 10:20 AM
Muy buena amigo
JamieTi684
9/20/16, 9:27 AM
Amazing story!!!!!
Anonymous
9/20/16, 7:44 AM
When will we get to know what happens next????
Anonymous
9/20/16, 7:34 AM
Make a third part D:!!! My dick needs it <3
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 5:10 AM
Oh ffs people stop making such a big deal about it. Go gripe on an anime lovers forum if you are that upset. Geez almost as bad as the harambe mess.
Willie Cici
9/20/16, 4:07 AM
Thank you JasCo for the comments. The person signing a power of attorney names the person his attorney in fact. So Derek does sigh the document, granting Nick his power of attorney. . As to the leather collar sentence, that's an error that I will correct. Thanks for the reading. I try to cut down on the errors by spending hours on the edits. Sometimes, the editing takes longer than the drafting.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 4:01 AM
More step dad action please!
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 3:05 AM
I think you may not have realized that unnecessarily killing a dog makes it very difficult for some readers to take the remainder of your story seriously. Some people are into that kind of emotional manipulation by direct sadism, but many are not.
Dave
9/20/16, 2:20 AM
This is another brilliant story in this wonderful story arc! So many writers here concentrate on the darker side of mind-control and manipulation, but there are occasional authors who explore just what an amazing force for healing something like telepathy or shared awareness could be. Kudos to you, and I'd love to see more!
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 2:01 AM
To person two posts up: would you still be laughing at us if the device was tested by. A mom throwing her child in front of a car? A crunch, a squeal of tires, and the infant was no more.