Recent Comments

9/20/16, 1:51 AM
I think you got the names mixed up a bit here: Derek then signed a document, making Nick his power of attorney, in control of all Nick’s affairs and bank accounts. ... Nick walked towards a dresser in the bedroom and retrieved a leather collar. He snapped the collar about Nick’s neck and locked the collar in place." That aside, I love a good comeuppance story.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 1:38 AM
I have always enjoyed your stories. Thanks for sharing this latest one. I look forward to part 2.
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/20/16, 12:56 AM
Nice story, can't wait for a part 2. But I can't help but laugh at all these people that come to this site to read stories about men who forcefully take control, manipulate, and alter other men's very memories and personality. But the moment an animal gets hurt they start complaining and stop reading. Anyway keep up the good work.
Sep 19, 2016
cutlerfan
9/20/16, 12:14 AM
Your character tested his device by making someone kill their dog? Lost all interest in read more after that!
Anonymous
9/19/16, 11:12 PM
Why would Nick's father allow Derek the ability to take Nick?
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/19/16, 10:30 PM
please more of this
Sep 19, 2016
Anonymous
9/19/16, 10:29 PM
I hate you killed a dog but i loved the story keep it up
Sep 19, 2016
Ollie369
9/19/16, 8:50 PM
Thanks everyone for all the feedback. It's been ages since I last wrote anything and it's nice to know people still read some of my old stories. I've got some ideas for a second part to this story so hopefully I'll get round doing another one soon!
Sep 19, 2016
A CONCERNED READER
9/19/16, 8:35 PM
...HOW ABOUT GIVING US A 'BULLY' OR TWO, PERHAPS A 'GAY' HOMOPHOBIC GUY..YOUR OBVIOUSLY NOT AFRAID OF POLITICAL CORRECTNESS OR YOU WOULDN'T HAVEN'T STARTED THE STORY BY THROWING THE DOG UNDER THE CAR !!!..ALSO A 'TWISTED' COP OR TWO WOULD BE HOT...ALL MEN GOING COUNTER TO SOCIETY'S NORMS..HOW ABOUT IT ?????
UchihaDEMS
9/19/16, 7:58 PM
Espero con ansias la siguiente parte!