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Jul 29, 2015
barrydillon80@gmail.com
9/11/16, 4:13 PM
Hot!
TimNJ
9/11/16, 1:15 PM
This chapter was even better than the first! Very hot!
Anonymous
9/11/16, 11:58 AM
I can't wait to read the result of Simon transforming Mike into a gay man and turning him into his slave. However, I'm also concerned about his family. I know it's a fantasy. But still...
David S
9/11/16, 11:16 AM
Great story! And if people here think writing is about grammar and punctuation, I guess that's their problem. Writing is about ideas, and yours are wonderfully dirty. :-) You even warned us that English is not your first language, and I congratulate you on your boldness to wreite in it. You're doing just fine, man! I hope this story continues!!
Ken
9/10/16, 11:44 PM
GREAT story. Can't wait for more...Hurry Please..
Apr 10, 2015
Anonymous
9/10/16, 10:31 PM
This is great. Hope there will be a sequel
Anonymous
9/10/16, 8:26 PM
Good idea for this story. Having the flashjack upgrade his penis by 2 inches to start out the story was a good touch. Obviously getting a bigger dick is hot and lulling the victim into a false sense of safety is a great way ofworking a transformation story. You could probably play around with him enjoying his upgrade for a little bit before you begin the drone transformation. I think what makes the stories hot is when the victim succumbs to enjoying what is happening to them. Of course as noted the English could be improved but I understood the story and it was hot.
Anonymous
9/10/16, 5:35 PM
Nice to see a faggification TF done so smoothly and intoxicating. U go gurl
BearyBoyish
9/10/16, 5:32 PM
I gotta say, it could have been hotter with more mental-change-struggles described in detail--- HOWEVER, I think I like this as a story a lot more as it is now. Ended up caring about sweet awkward Jeff a lot more than about TF-boners.