Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/10/16, 8:26 PM
Good idea for this story. Having the flashjack upgrade his penis by 2 inches to start out the story was a good touch. Obviously getting a bigger dick is hot and lulling the victim into a false sense of safety is a great way ofworking a transformation story. You could probably play around with him enjoying his upgrade for a little bit before you begin the drone transformation. I think what makes the stories hot is when the victim succumbs to enjoying what is happening to them. Of course as noted the English could be improved but I understood the story and it was hot.
Anonymous
9/10/16, 5:35 PM
Nice to see a faggification TF done so smoothly and intoxicating. U go gurl
BearyBoyish
9/10/16, 5:32 PM
I gotta say, it could have been hotter with more mental-change-struggles described in detail--- HOWEVER, I think I like this as a story a lot more as it is now. Ended up caring about sweet awkward Jeff a lot more than about TF-boners.
Anonymous
9/10/16, 2:57 PM
Great story and loved the transformation! The race change was a fun bonus! Hope you write more!
Anonymous
9/10/16, 1:54 PM
Do we get the story on the black NBA player......
Anonymous
9/10/16, 1:34 PM
OH MY GOD YOU'RE BACK. I REALLY LOVE YOUR WORK AND THIS STORY IS SO HOT. PLS KEEP WRITING MORE
redbird
9/10/16, 1:05 PM
Wow. Very nice!
Anonymous
9/10/16, 11:01 AM
Personally I'm a fan of body hairs, but I do consider shaving a form of humiliation, which is why I appreciate it in this story. :3 I hope the rest of the football team can have a reunion, and a major mind-fuck session. :D
Anonymous
9/10/16, 8:46 AM
I hope that in one of the next chapters Mike doesn't need to be in trance. It would be hot if Mike made the decision to be Simon's leather slave. Of course, it would be terrible for his wife and children. But Simon could get Wes become Mike's replacement ;) While Mike enjoys his life as a gay man Wes finally has the chance to make his own decision.
Anonymous
9/10/16, 8:11 AM
This is going the perfect direction. Glad Mike is smooth and clean-shaven now! All the more pure to be molested from mind to body :-D