Recent Comments

Kka
9/7/16, 11:12 PM
Yes! New story! Cant wait to see the MEN play. Hopefully the kid stays out
Anonymous
9/7/16, 6:22 PM
Finally a New story! I love your great work. Hopefully coach reunites with more of his player-daddies <3
Anonymous
9/7/16, 5:58 PM
You've written some great stories in the past. There are plenty of us who love your style and hope you continue submitting. Would be great to read followons from some of the stuff you've already posted, like 'Following The Game'.
Anonymous
9/7/16, 5:50 PM
Always loved this story and the potential. Hopefully now you're writing again you'll continue with the story! :)
cutlerfan
9/7/16, 5:39 PM
A great epilogue! I'm glad things are relatively back to normal and they are mostly still friends. I have no idea what Dalton's take on their new lives would be. Thanks for a terrific story!
Anonymous
9/7/16, 4:25 PM
Incredibly hot!. Just wondering tho, what happened to the epilouge of keeping it in the family?
tom
9/7/16, 3:51 PM
looking forward to reading how the son is used
Anonymous
9/7/16, 3:49 PM
nice start
9/7/16, 11:03 AM
I think this might be your most positive story! It's just as hot as any of the others too...
Kyle
9/7/16, 10:32 AM
Really love the concept of this. Well done for writing and posting this in a language that isn't your first one. English is a tough language if it's not your first. Posting a story take a lot of courage, I congratulate you. I got the sense of the story but it would be worthwhile to find someone to work with to help with the English. If you don't mind some contribution to the plot as well as help with language, maybe the NCMC Wiki Community could help too (I presume, I don't know much about it). Keep writing!