Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/6/16, 4:26 PM
This is too good, when does your summer end:)
Anonymous
9/6/16, 4:22 PM
did u google translate this shit ?
Mordred
9/6/16, 3:51 PM
Please make the family members have sex
Anonymous
9/6/16, 2:15 PM
I don't know if this was a good story, because it was UNREADABLE. Not just grammar issues, usage, syntax, and plain diction was horrible.
Anonymous
9/6/16, 1:24 PM
interesting premise - and props to you for bringing it to the logical conclusion, no matter how much we might want different results for some of the characters e.g. Ox doesn't explain who he "really" or formerly was; Seth is an annoying stereotype and the other guys are relatively "chill." Good work!
Anonymous
9/6/16, 12:33 PM
Finally it end, It's a sweet ending. Kinda sad Ox had to change Perm for him and not show him his real self.
Kyle
9/6/16, 12:02 PM
Tremendous series, congratulations on completing it, Cris. A great ride and a nice little ending. Brilliant flow, great writing and believable characters with a very cool plot and pacing. And with hotness to boot. I agree with Goodbiforever and look forward to your next project.
Anonymous
9/6/16, 10:58 AM
outside of the many grammar issues wasn't that bad
Goodbiforever
9/6/16, 8:10 AM
Ah, a happy ending for all. Makes me warm and fuzzy. Thanks for the story, Cris... I've enjoyed quite a few of yours, but I can honestly say this is probably among the best work you've ever done. Be proud of it... you hit this one out of the proverbial park.
Anonymous
9/6/16, 7:09 AM
GAH!!!! SO HOT!!! Love the role reversal and i hope theres more chapters cumming ;3