Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/6/16, 6:57 PM
Wow...what a great story Thanks
Anonymous
9/6/16, 6:55 PM
Sorta sad with Seth, especially, just because he was purely ignorant of the effects, and it's clear that the drink impaired his thinking far more than others in the first place. Dalton's seeming a bit tragic now-- comeuppance and all. Hopefully he could learn something where Seth's a cartoonish dumb bitch now.
Anonymous
9/6/16, 4:30 PM
What ever happened to Pete and Sean getting into diapers? You're such a great writer, I know you diaper story would be so hot.
Anonymous
9/6/16, 4:26 PM
This is too good, when does your summer end:)
Anonymous
9/6/16, 4:22 PM
did u google translate this shit ?
Mordred
9/6/16, 3:51 PM
Please make the family members have sex
Anonymous
9/6/16, 2:15 PM
I don't know if this was a good story, because it was UNREADABLE. Not just grammar issues, usage, syntax, and plain diction was horrible.
Anonymous
9/6/16, 1:24 PM
interesting premise - and props to you for bringing it to the logical conclusion, no matter how much we might want different results for some of the characters e.g. Ox doesn't explain who he "really" or formerly was; Seth is an annoying stereotype and the other guys are relatively "chill." Good work!
Anonymous
9/6/16, 12:33 PM
Finally it end, It's a sweet ending. Kinda sad Ox had to change Perm for him and not show him his real self.
Kyle
9/6/16, 12:02 PM
Tremendous series, congratulations on completing it, Cris. A great ride and a nice little ending. Brilliant flow, great writing and believable characters with a very cool plot and pacing. And with hotness to boot. I agree with Goodbiforever and look forward to your next project.