Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/6/16, 1:24 PM
interesting premise - and props to you for bringing it to the logical conclusion, no matter how much we might want different results for some of the characters e.g. Ox doesn't explain who he "really" or formerly was; Seth is an annoying stereotype and the other guys are relatively "chill." Good work!
Anonymous
9/6/16, 12:33 PM
Finally it end, It's a sweet ending. Kinda sad Ox had to change Perm for him and not show him his real self.
Kyle
9/6/16, 12:02 PM
Tremendous series, congratulations on completing it, Cris. A great ride and a nice little ending. Brilliant flow, great writing and believable characters with a very cool plot and pacing. And with hotness to boot. I agree with Goodbiforever and look forward to your next project.
Anonymous
9/6/16, 10:58 AM
outside of the many grammar issues wasn't that bad
Goodbiforever
9/6/16, 8:10 AM
Ah, a happy ending for all. Makes me warm and fuzzy. Thanks for the story, Cris... I've enjoyed quite a few of yours, but I can honestly say this is probably among the best work you've ever done. Be proud of it... you hit this one out of the proverbial park.
Anonymous
9/6/16, 7:09 AM
GAH!!!! SO HOT!!! Love the role reversal and i hope theres more chapters cumming ;3
Darmani
9/6/16, 2:41 AM
I know I'm supposed to hate Seth and see his current state as "just desserts" but he was drugged against his will mindaltered and ended up slutting up to the point his brain stops working Also not liking "gay now" as a punishment or improvement. He's been drugged and raped for being a homophobic asshole taken advantage of by thoughtless drug using assholes. Oh well the focus is more on Nick and Brendan and then Ox. Which HAS been a nice story, along with Jeff, though I hope lying isn't as much a thing moving forward. And like how committing to the "yes he IS straight, this doesn't need fixing" even with other lovable antics. I too mourn the loss of that muscle and hair. Not sure how I feel about Brendan. On one level a lot of this is the mixed Mariposa driving him nuts and he has legit complaints but he's such a slimeball about it... Also he seems to be "getting" his desserts. He's the hot guy who has power and sexuality to spare but not the man he wants. Admittedly likely the solution there is enough contrition .. though not likely possible.
cutlerfan
9/6/16, 1:16 AM
Interesting! Two doses of Mariposa means it is permanent. So Seth is gay and Dalton is a middle aged monster permanently. I hope there is more to really finish the story!
9/6/16, 1:04 AM
Please do not make the family members have sex with each other.
Anonymous
9/6/16, 12:33 AM
Don't need your pre and post story comments - they are a distraction