Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/2/16, 2:54 PM
Plz plz plz write more chapters. So we can watch dumb straight boy become a fag In front of everyone at the gym
Oct 7, 2015
Anonymous
9/2/16, 2:37 PM
Here's a great example why stories don't need multiple chapters. Let your mind come up with the next part. The porn star goes into the lab and becomes a human GIF. Hubris and greed rewarded . That's what makes a great story. That;'s what makes a well-written story. This author's stories are crafted well stories. Can't wait to read his offerings on this site.
Kyle
9/2/16, 11:38 AM
Another chapter! Hooray! Thanks. And the plot thickens. Very curious where this is headed. And what Mariposa will do to the gang next.
Anonymous
9/2/16, 5:01 AM
Love this!! Please go on with the brainwashing and great detailed writing
Anonymous
9/2/16, 3:50 AM
Introducing Em with making her talk about old Devon was a smart move!! Well balance between intensive description on the protagonist and descriptive background. Very talented writing, the best and most favorite here!! Appreciate it.
Anonymous
9/2/16, 2:50 AM
I agree with the other comments. The line between reality and fantasy is thin, but that's what makes it hot. Great story!!!
Jun 24, 2016
Anonymous
9/2/16, 2:48 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!!
Anonymous
9/2/16, 2:47 AM
Story was hot!!
Anonymous
9/2/16, 1:28 AM
'Dad' isn't the dad. His wife cheated on him and produced this 'Bastard'. That is what he tells Al the 'talent agent'. no genetic link and decision to be a step-father; probably getting his revenge on his wife and the other man this way too.
Mongo
9/2/16, 12:20 AM
I like the update. I sense a better understanding of the feelings of the material.