Recent Comments

Kyle
9/2/16, 11:38 AM
Another chapter! Hooray! Thanks. And the plot thickens. Very curious where this is headed. And what Mariposa will do to the gang next.
Anonymous
9/2/16, 5:01 AM
Love this!! Please go on with the brainwashing and great detailed writing
Anonymous
9/2/16, 3:50 AM
Introducing Em with making her talk about old Devon was a smart move!! Well balance between intensive description on the protagonist and descriptive background. Very talented writing, the best and most favorite here!! Appreciate it.
Anonymous
9/2/16, 2:50 AM
I agree with the other comments. The line between reality and fantasy is thin, but that's what makes it hot. Great story!!!
Jun 24, 2016
Anonymous
9/2/16, 2:48 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!!
Anonymous
9/2/16, 2:47 AM
Story was hot!!
Anonymous
9/2/16, 1:28 AM
'Dad' isn't the dad. His wife cheated on him and produced this 'Bastard'. That is what he tells Al the 'talent agent'. no genetic link and decision to be a step-father; probably getting his revenge on his wife and the other man this way too.
Mongo
9/2/16, 12:20 AM
I like the update. I sense a better understanding of the feelings of the material.
Anonymous
9/1/16, 10:20 PM
I liked the story...I like Barry being a top...keep the good work...I look forward to your next chapter.
Anonymous
9/1/16, 8:12 PM
I wonder if Daddy Cecil's last line is foreshadowing of how he'll turn out. Kind of curious about what'll go down with poor ol' "Theth" too after he drinks some random ones, the little dumbass. Maybe he'll end up a chubby faggy cub or something, or completely left-turn into some other type (maybe he'll drink a "bro" one and he'll just turn back to normal as it evens out. Haha). Can't imagine he's become even more of a silly joke, at least not in this same way. Haha. Hijinks ensue, regardless, with Jeffrey ever being the straight-man (so to speak) to all this.