Recent Comments

cutlerfan
9/1/16, 1:41 PM
Wow more intrigue! Seth may OD on Mariposa and stay gay. This is getting really interesting. I feel more hopeful things will work out now. Thank you for the story! I look forward to the next part!
Anonymous
9/1/16, 11:34 AM
This is great - action packed and funny! I love the mental gymnastics these guys are going through to understand and justify their changing bodies and orientations. Fun night with Mariposa!
TimNJ
9/1/16, 8:04 AM
Great Axel R, I am really looking forward to reading chapter 2!
9/1/16, 4:28 AM
Working on it :) Unfortunately very busy with work. We had a few nurses quit so we're REALLY short...I'm currently picking up a crazy amount of shifts which means I'm hating life but loving pay day. But I have been spending a bit of time here and there just escaping into the story. Have a bit done including the drive to the police station, a little bonding with JJ and Jake, and the arrival at the station and introduction to Alex walking in. I'll be working on it as much as I can, my friends!
Anonymous
9/1/16, 4:24 AM
Sorry yes the step dad is in on it but that don't make him evil
Anonymous
9/1/16, 4:23 AM
I don't understand some of the above comments. Maybe the step dad is in on it maybe he isn't. If he is sending the lazy step son there deliberately that does not make him evil - or a jerk - that's the premise of a lot of stories on here. All that matters is that Cal gets sent there and has stuff done to him. I thought the story itself was fine.
Anonymous
9/1/16, 4:14 AM
The treaser line said these guys are fit but there's no physical description at all. What do these guys do? Something with computers but there is also an IT admin guy??
9/1/16, 4:08 AM
Loved this story! Where is the bar so I can give myself to the Master
Anonymous
9/1/16, 3:06 AM
Not sure where and why this is happening Maybe it will be cleared up on future episodes
Anonymous
9/1/16, 2:40 AM
Writing requires editing. Take some time to write the story. Then, take more time crafting your words. If you use MSWord, use the Spelling/Grammar check. It will help you with the finish product. As for the substance, that was hot!!! It's the control factor that makes me hard. Can't wait to see how you keep this going.