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Aug 23, 2024
Anonymous
8/24/24, 5:26 PM
Overall a hot story and I very much loved it! Though his comical proportions at the end kind of broke the illusion that he could possibly join the team like that. Still perfect beef fantasy!
8/24/24, 5:11 PM
Thanks for the recap! It's always nice to see one of those in stories with large cast, I agree.:green_heart: I also felt like the stories had less writing mistakes. And I did not expect to see a submissive top, but you are really good at coming with new ideas for the plot!!! :green_heart:
8/24/24, 4:11 PM
I love the creativity on display!!! But the grammar is a bit distracting. Things like "what do I due?" instead of "what do I do?", some missing commas, and I think you meant scream instead of keen in "high pitched keen he finally came"
8/21/24, 3:49 PM
Oooo this is exciting , can’t wait to see where this goes 🥵🥵🥵🥵

8/24/24, 2:59 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) It was a real short one this time, just a quick catch up with the situation at hq, next chapter should be a bit longer :stuck_out_tongue:
8/22/24, 12:32 PM
Holy cow, that was hot!!! Really enjoyed the description of Finn, sedated by the gas, getting a handjob and being chloroformed by Rosenwave simultaneously. Great stuff! And now that Finn and Rosenwave have a deal, how will Finn convince Kian that it's in their best interest to help Rosenwave? And how will Will and Kai fit into all this? So many possibilities. This story is awesome! :smiley:

8/24/24, 2:58 PM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) As always, very glad you like it :blush: Finn and Kian are in a really tough spot, but at least it's not as bad as last time. And as for Will and Kai, they have their own Mikey-related crisis on their hands :grin:
8/24/24, 2:07 PM
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8/24/24, 1:36 PM
Waiting impatiently for more
Anonym
8/24/24, 9:21 AM
Oh man, another exciting adventure!! We finally got a backstory for Ames husband. Oh the intrigue!! (My personal guess is that Mastermind is that Mastermind is either Jinx sibling, or maybe Jimx themselves.... so interesting!) Also, Hunk!! Yayyy, I recognize him. Thanks for giving him a spot in the spotlight, he is so hot and it's a shame he isn't appreciated more. Speaking of, hmm that's another hot hypno scene. I don't know if I mentioned it in another comment, but I love how every henchman has a pet name for Mastermind. It's exactly what I would do, if I were creating a harem of supervillians. I am looking forward to the next episode with barely contained excitement. (Seriously, I dropped everything as soon as I saw you had posted). Anyway, that's all from me for now.
8/24/24, 8:00 AM
After rereading, i think it's an irony that the Wolf King's brothers initially wanted to kill Gil, but it turns out Oh shoot i should put spoiler tag >! It turns out that the originals wanted to kill all Western men anyway, so it's kind of a neat connection

Pcm
8/24/24, 8:24 AM
@[temporaryhotsaucetofu](/user/show/10034005) Embracing the Primal Beast is not all that bad, isn't it? Of course, Gil has become another bloodthirsty beastman, but his uncles now adore him! I'm really happy to know that someone would go through the trouble re-reading my stories!