Recent Comments

8/31/16, 7:47 PM
The story is awesome, please continue! But there is one massive problem: punctuation, specifically with your commas. Try using a online punctuation checker. Good luck with chapter 2, hope I was able to help.
The story is looking good. So far.
8/31/16, 5:29 PM
The story is looking good... So far. Pls dont put my hopes up and make this a hot one 😉
Anonymous
8/31/16, 4:15 PM
More! Let's see where this is going Love me some guys in suits
Anonymous
8/31/16, 3:14 PM
Chapter 2 please!!!
Anonymous
8/31/16, 2:37 PM
definitely liking the premise of this one. let's see where it goes! :-)
Anonymous
8/31/16, 2:37 PM
looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Anonymous
8/31/16, 2:12 PM
Continue please! The concept is great and I want to see some hot dad action
the guardsman
8/31/16, 1:18 PM
do you dislike the stories or just the numbering scheme?
Anonymous
8/31/16, 11:22 AM
very hot, thank you!
eager reader
8/31/16, 10:55 AM
Can't wait for chapter 9 please please please