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Nov 1, 2015
8/23/16, 7:41 PM
let's go with "something", sometimes its more fun to let you boys use a bit of imagination to fill in the parts of the story that the hapless hunk/victim doesn't himself narrate!
A San Francisco Fan
8/23/16, 5:47 PM
Love it when a bro get's really 'dumbed-down'..hope he end's up 'stupid-as-fuck' !!!..so hot !!!
Ace
8/23/16, 5:20 PM
WOW! WONDER OF WONDERS! A most excellent, erotic, hot, lust-filled and tantalizing 'Cumming' of age story. I love the whole top dog, alpha stud of the school being put in his proper place... Cocks shoved down his cum guzzling throat and rammed up his wanton ass-pussy. Another aspect I enjoyed was how Mikey went from rapist to raped stud puppy, via his own co-conspirator, Nick. Nick, who certainly put the DOM in Dominator. As for the ending with the coach and his boys 'cumming' to the private party from out of town. I just know it's the coach and his team that were the team that lost the State championship game, mainly due to Travis. I can just imagine the absolute workout they'll all give to the star quarterbacks ass-cunt and throat. WOW! I also envision Travis made to wear his jockstrap and football uniform as the party begins, get'in pounded up his ass-twat with just a little slit cut in his skintight pants. I imagine Travis' uniform pants like what the Texas Longhorn uni team wears, with the see-thru pants where one can easily see a players white jockstrap, ass and even the cleft. Look it up on line then prepare to jack off to some really hot and sexy football players jockstrap'd images if you want. πŸ˜ˆπŸ˜πŸ‘ΏπŸ’ͺπŸ‘‚πŸ‘…πŸ‘„β€πŸ‘β˜
Anonymous
8/23/16, 5:05 PM
Wow... hope continue soon!
Anonymous
8/23/16, 5:04 PM
Great story!
xORRiNx
8/23/16, 4:15 PM
Awesome :)
Ace
8/23/16, 1:08 PM
Dude! Wow! This story needs a sequel asap, should your inspiration decide so. A sequel where that huge dicked dwarf is able to take every stud agent down, making them all his personal macho stud boi harem. Then Rollo makes it so the agency is under his control, thus he's able to take out any and all criminal competitors, which eventually has him ruling all nefarious mob activity worldwide. All thanks to his special drug and his 13 inch Cock of Ultimate Control & Domination. πŸ˜ˆπŸ‘ΏπŸ‘ΉπŸ‘„πŸ‘…β€
Tattcub
8/23/16, 12:20 PM
Keep on at it. Love it.
Anonymous
8/23/16, 12:09 PM
This is awesome, dude !!
Kyle
8/23/16, 11:51 AM
Great writing. The violence and events were quite confronting, I am hoping that's it for those because they were very affecting. Be interesting to see the cops' reactions to different people in the cell in the morning. As for one other reader's question about Jeff, I like where he is. He's the less extreme experience but still having a changed perspective. Though I get the impression cumming can bolster the change even after the initial surge so who knows where he may end up. My reaction was 'hooray, another chapter' as I'm loving this story and keen to see where it's going. Dalton is definitely a dick but is that accentuated by the drink or just that he's not limited in levels of dickishness by his body now with a new powerhouse version. How much does the Mariposa change them? Crave guys, sure. Horny? Probably. What about other behaviour: Attitude, jealousy, anger, abusiveness, passivity, confidence. Accentuated? Added? Altered? Everyone seems happy to overlook the slutty behaviour of Seth while he's changed. But how much slack will Dalton's actions get as just being a result of the magic juice? How far can "it wasn't me, it was the drink" go when all is said and done.