Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/23/16, 1:17 AM
Will Jeffrey experience anymore changes?? I'm dying to see him further hulked out and masculinized, but I'm not sure I see it coming anymore. Great story tho, regardless. Really enjoying it
Anonymous
8/23/16, 12:59 AM
'Campbell & Donaldson' - The Conscript. Nice touch
Anonymous
8/23/16, 12:09 AM
this is great! keep going
Anonymous
8/22/16, 11:55 PM
The Gay Spiral Mind Control Story Collection -- "MIND CONTROL". This whole story involved mind control, the power of Caleb to control the bimbo sister and the himbo brother. That's what make it hot. The sex is hot because it's taboo. Brother fucks sister, boyfriend fucks brother -- at the same time. Disturbing, yes --- sexy, hell yes!!!
Anonymous
8/22/16, 11:50 PM
I enjoy reading your stories. This one, I couldn't figure out where you were headed. Then, I read the closing paragraphs, and it made sense. I went back to read it again. Good story, good ending. The pics were hot, too!!
Anonymous
8/22/16, 11:45 PM
Wicked, twisted shit!!!
Anonymous
8/22/16, 11:43 PM
Dark, twisted and sexy. Loved the story lines.
lukemyoliver@gmail.com
8/22/16, 10:42 PM
Wow thanks for the positive response! :) Workin on improving the story transitioning, glad I got some jizz out of some of you though ;) Yes it was on nifty a long time ago, I've gone through the entire story chapter by chapter and have been rewriting/changing things around. Will have some very new directions to go in soon now that the foundation is set up :)
barrydillon80@gmail.com
8/22/16, 10:20 PM
Very nice job with the story! You did a great job at really getting into the point of view of the character. There where a few times where I thought I had figured out what the ending of the story was going to be, but then you'd get me doubting myself. One thing I'd like to know is, did Stacy incorrectly remember what happened with her and the homeless person? From what Stacy says about the encounter, the gypsy/witch totally overreacted; Stacy tried to apologize, but the gypsy/witch was being all crazy...I hope the gypsy/witch doesn't read this comment ;)
Anonymous
8/22/16, 7:54 PM
Yeah I read this story on Nifty years ago. Nice to see it wasn't buried and forgotten.