Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/25/16, 11:07 PM
Oh, poor Em...you're too smart. As you guessed, your friend would become another Mr. Machismo awarded an athletic scholarship by Coach. Nobody here can't wait to see that happening very soon !!
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8/25/16, 10:51 PM
cant wait for more thumbs up
Anonymous
8/25/16, 10:09 PM
It's interesting to think about when the very first three paragraph actually happened, before the bad dream or the final phase of his transformation. Either way, I would love it. Can't wait to see the whole picture!!
Anonymous
8/25/16, 9:33 PM
gets hotter and hotter. can't wait for more!
Aug 14, 2016
8/25/16, 8:36 PM
The reason the girls did that is because, you know, girls just wanna have fun...
Anonymous
8/25/16, 7:45 PM
wow... this story is so good!!! every continue so much better!!! i can't wait for next chapter!
Anonymous
8/25/16, 7:39 PM
This is so well written, and so so hot. Good job. :)
Anonymous
8/25/16, 7:29 PM
Wow, Devon was also a happy victim !! That's a great spin. Love it bro!!
Anonymous
8/25/16, 7:23 PM
Ah, this was well done. Quite intense and finally gave us a sense of where it comes from and where it would go. Great part III !! I appreciate you keep up the pace to make the story line quite live, vivid and powerful. Really admire your writing skill and idea !!
Anonymous
8/25/16, 6:32 PM
HOT HOT HOT