Recent Comments

Kyle
8/23/16, 11:51 AM
Great writing. The violence and events were quite confronting, I am hoping that's it for those because they were very affecting. Be interesting to see the cops' reactions to different people in the cell in the morning. As for one other reader's question about Jeff, I like where he is. He's the less extreme experience but still having a changed perspective. Though I get the impression cumming can bolster the change even after the initial surge so who knows where he may end up. My reaction was 'hooray, another chapter' as I'm loving this story and keen to see where it's going. Dalton is definitely a dick but is that accentuated by the drink or just that he's not limited in levels of dickishness by his body now with a new powerhouse version. How much does the Mariposa change them? Crave guys, sure. Horny? Probably. What about other behaviour: Attitude, jealousy, anger, abusiveness, passivity, confidence. Accentuated? Added? Altered? Everyone seems happy to overlook the slutty behaviour of Seth while he's changed. But how much slack will Dalton's actions get as just being a result of the magic juice? How far can "it wasn't me, it was the drink" go when all is said and done.
Anonymous
8/23/16, 9:06 AM
This has GOT to continue
Nov 1, 2015
Anonymous
8/23/16, 7:19 AM
Is the ice cream boy dead or a ghost of something?
Anonymous
8/23/16, 6:54 AM
Love it!!! So dark
Anonymous
8/23/16, 6:27 AM
More's on the way, I hope.
Tox
8/23/16, 6:21 AM
Always been a fan of these, pretty good :)
xORRiNx
8/23/16, 5:40 AM
I think it's no shock to anyone that i effing LOVE THIS! :P It's nice to see some jock stories!!!!!
Anonymous
8/23/16, 4:34 AM
I'm glad I rediscovered this story!!!! Love what an asshole the top is!
Anonymous
8/23/16, 1:17 AM
Will Jeffrey experience anymore changes?? I'm dying to see him further hulked out and masculinized, but I'm not sure I see it coming anymore. Great story tho, regardless. Really enjoying it
Anonymous
8/23/16, 12:59 AM
'Campbell & Donaldson' - The Conscript. Nice touch