Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/22/16, 3:17 PM
For the baritone and basso mentions, I was kind of thinking you'd be referring to Seth as an alto by now too. Haha.
8/22/16, 1:49 PM
I guess I just find it unsettling that submission has to be associated with female body parts and being "female" and how this is a gay man's fantasy. But I guess some were turned on by it while others were repulsed. Each to their own I guess.
Anonymous
8/22/16, 11:51 AM
While ending wasn't my cup of tea, this story was so hot because it focused on mental changes and physical changes equally, along with that lack of control aspect. The details about his actual life memories changing was what really did it for me. Very hot. Additionally the author was very astute to point out that a big part of being submissive/wanting this dom fantasy is actually having low self-esteem / lack of confidence. In some ways I don't think having this fantasy/desire is healthy, or rather it is a sign that my self-esteem is not so good, and I thank the author for helping me remember that.
Anonymous
8/22/16, 11:47 AM
This was perverse and hot. Don't listen to the complainers!
S-Man
8/22/16, 11:17 AM
Love when an arrogant white boi stud cop gets put in his place by a stud black dude. Best part of this story was the description of Tony in his tight uniform pants as his new Black Master played with that ass then slit the tiny hole in those tight pants, then popped that cop's ass cheery. Nothing hotter than a gorgeous white stud cop getting pussied by a Black stud, especially when that cop is in full uniform. ✔
Kyle
8/22/16, 6:56 AM
Love that there is another chapter to this. Great addition combining the two to make a new potion. Can't wait to see what else happens to Jason. Well done. Really enjoying this series.
cutlerfan
8/22/16, 5:37 AM
I really want to see this to the end. I'm not sure how any of them can ever go back to normal now. The damage to relationships is done. Even if they revert physically..they will remember some of this at least.
Anonymous
8/22/16, 5:30 AM
Sorry, you lost me on this. Not the ending that I hoped for, expected or enjoyed.
rubbrsome
8/22/16, 5:23 AM
What a great story. I'm totally sucked in and want to know Jake's fate. I want to know what happens at the Indoctrination Unit. I find it especially telling, that for a story that had no sex .. not even kissing ... could get me so hard. That tells me that the writer is succeeding. He got me invested, intrigued and aroused. Well done!
TimNJ
8/22/16, 4:09 AM
I loved each and every chapter; I look forward to your next submission to this site!