Recent Comments

barrydillon80@gmail.com
8/22/16, 10:20 PM
Very nice job with the story! You did a great job at really getting into the point of view of the character. There where a few times where I thought I had figured out what the ending of the story was going to be, but then you'd get me doubting myself. One thing I'd like to know is, did Stacy incorrectly remember what happened with her and the homeless person? From what Stacy says about the encounter, the gypsy/witch totally overreacted; Stacy tried to apologize, but the gypsy/witch was being all crazy...I hope the gypsy/witch doesn't read this comment ;)
Anonymous
8/22/16, 7:54 PM
Yeah I read this story on Nifty years ago. Nice to see it wasn't buried and forgotten.
Anonymous
8/22/16, 5:38 PM
This is one of those stories that I really want to know the end to, just so I can sit back and enjoy reading the events leading up to the finale. Not knowing is killing me!
Anonymous
8/22/16, 5:27 PM
Can't wait for the newest addition to this. So good!
Anonymous
8/22/16, 5:21 PM
very good story
shortnlookn@yahoo.com
8/22/16, 3:31 PM
Thanks for the comments. I wanted to try something a bit different from everything else, and was inspired to do it by xorrinx knowing it wasn't going to be everyone's cup of tea. Plan on writing more, possibly a new story from the store or something altogether different.
Anonymous
8/22/16, 3:17 PM
For the baritone and basso mentions, I was kind of thinking you'd be referring to Seth as an alto by now too. Haha.
8/22/16, 1:49 PM
I guess I just find it unsettling that submission has to be associated with female body parts and being "female" and how this is a gay man's fantasy. But I guess some were turned on by it while others were repulsed. Each to their own I guess.
Anonymous
8/22/16, 11:51 AM
While ending wasn't my cup of tea, this story was so hot because it focused on mental changes and physical changes equally, along with that lack of control aspect. The details about his actual life memories changing was what really did it for me. Very hot. Additionally the author was very astute to point out that a big part of being submissive/wanting this dom fantasy is actually having low self-esteem / lack of confidence. In some ways I don't think having this fantasy/desire is healthy, or rather it is a sign that my self-esteem is not so good, and I thank the author for helping me remember that.
Anonymous
8/22/16, 11:47 AM
This was perverse and hot. Don't listen to the complainers!