Recent Comments

TimNJ
8/22/16, 4:09 AM
I loved each and every chapter; I look forward to your next submission to this site!
Anonymous
8/22/16, 2:49 AM
Ty for the chapter. Can't wait to read the next one. I really really hope Dalton will not get off free. The more the story progress the worse he is getting or rather the less I can ignore his douchness. I wish Nick and Brendan will be okay and safe by the time the effect will be over. Funnily enough I wish for Nick and Brendan to return back to normal asap, but for Ford and Jeff to take as much time he can.(seth is like, whatever XD) Verywell written! Defenetly one of the most engaging stories I've read here
A San Francisco Fan
8/22/16, 12:38 AM
Robin: Hope your feeling better ! I seemed to remember some of your story from three or four years ago, so I looked-it-up on another MC site & found all twelve chapters [though you changed your author's name]...and enjoyed re-reading it.....Hope you fully recover so we have many more years of your exciting writing to look forward to......[please don't be upset with your readers..it's natural, if they think your in the midst of writing, to make suggestions based on their own 'erotic' desires.]...Just GET WELL !!!
8/22/16, 12:36 AM
I think I can safely say that there's no violence from here on out.
Aurora
8/21/16, 10:01 PM
I LOVE this story so much. Please don't do any chubby or stink ones. That would gross me out. As for ideas, I think a pheromone that will make other men become dumb, horny bimbos would be hot. I also think a card should turn one of them into an incubus. You could give one of them the magical ability to make clothes on other men vanish. Also, maybe a magical ability to make other men's butts or dicks grow.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 7:18 PM
Impressively written as always, though this is veering further into social commentary and unsexy violence than I expected.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 5:38 PM
I expected it goes down hill, but wow the violence is so scary.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 3:34 PM
imo a very hot and worthy tribute to one of the genre's most talented writers.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 10:09 AM
A great first story. It would be a great start of a series
Anonymous
8/21/16, 8:58 AM
Great story