Recent Comments

A San Francisco Fan
8/22/16, 12:38 AM
Robin: Hope your feeling better ! I seemed to remember some of your story from three or four years ago, so I looked-it-up on another MC site & found all twelve chapters [though you changed your author's name]...and enjoyed re-reading it.....Hope you fully recover so we have many more years of your exciting writing to look forward to......[please don't be upset with your readers..it's natural, if they think your in the midst of writing, to make suggestions based on their own 'erotic' desires.]...Just GET WELL !!!
8/22/16, 12:36 AM
I think I can safely say that there's no violence from here on out.
Aurora
8/21/16, 10:01 PM
I LOVE this story so much. Please don't do any chubby or stink ones. That would gross me out. As for ideas, I think a pheromone that will make other men become dumb, horny bimbos would be hot. I also think a card should turn one of them into an incubus. You could give one of them the magical ability to make clothes on other men vanish. Also, maybe a magical ability to make other men's butts or dicks grow.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 7:18 PM
Impressively written as always, though this is veering further into social commentary and unsexy violence than I expected.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 5:38 PM
I expected it goes down hill, but wow the violence is so scary.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 3:34 PM
imo a very hot and worthy tribute to one of the genre's most talented writers.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 10:09 AM
A great first story. It would be a great start of a series
Anonymous
8/21/16, 8:58 AM
Great story
Jul 29, 2015
Anonymous
8/21/16, 7:45 AM
Damn this is hot keep up the good work
Anonymous
8/21/16, 6:25 AM
That was amazing. I hope you write more.