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Aurora
8/21/16, 10:01 PM
I LOVE this story so much. Please don't do any chubby or stink ones. That would gross me out. As for ideas, I think a pheromone that will make other men become dumb, horny bimbos would be hot. I also think a card should turn one of them into an incubus. You could give one of them the magical ability to make clothes on other men vanish. Also, maybe a magical ability to make other men's butts or dicks grow.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 7:18 PM
Impressively written as always, though this is veering further into social commentary and unsexy violence than I expected.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 5:38 PM
I expected it goes down hill, but wow the violence is so scary.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 3:34 PM
imo a very hot and worthy tribute to one of the genre's most talented writers.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 10:09 AM
A great first story. It would be a great start of a series
Anonymous
8/21/16, 8:58 AM
Great story
Jul 29, 2015
Anonymous
8/21/16, 7:45 AM
Damn this is hot keep up the good work
Anonymous
8/21/16, 6:25 AM
That was amazing. I hope you write more.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 4:35 AM
The control this man has is hot, but this conflict he has with his girl is troubling.
Anonymous
8/21/16, 4:33 AM
That was hot!! I'm still hard.