Recent Comments

8/19/16, 2:00 AM
To the poster above, read my comments in the previous chapter.
Anonymous
8/19/16, 1:38 AM
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK..LOVE HOW FAST YOU'R TURNING OUT THIS SUPERIOR STORY !....................PLEASE INTRODUCE SEAN TO SILKY PANTIES...WE HAVEN'T HAD A GOOD 'HYPNOTIZED-INTO-A-SISSY' STORY IN A LONG TIME !!!!
8/19/16, 1:27 AM
Liked this. More please - maybe with both assistants being involved with other customers
8/19/16, 12:23 AM
LOL...EdLam's one of my proofreaders. :) I also find it funny how much people are predicting things that actually do happen eventually, or that happen in a different way, but at least with a similar train of thought. Suffice it to say that while not everyone will get what they're looking for out of this, I think a lot of you will be happy with where this goes in the end.
A San Francisco Fan
8/19/16, 12:19 AM
Cedric & esp. Jared should lose all respect for Sean..and Sean should now expect & accept this...which would open the door to some [homophobic style] BULLYING [in the manner of my other favorite author EdLam.....I know their two different writers & styles, but it would be so hot to see Cedric really 'fuck-up' Sean's mind as he clueless-ly becomes a complete Sissy/Faggot while Jared is programmed to become more 'macho' in his treatment of his dad & Cedric takes on even more control, until Sean can do almost nothing without Cedric's suggestion...Time for him to move in, isn't it [taking-on the manly father role as Sean becomes the family's full time MOTHER !!!
A CONCERNED READER
8/18/16, 11:17 PM
MY FAVORITE RECENT STORY : I HOPE CEDRIC HAS SOMETHING INTERESTING PLANNED FOR THE FATHER'S FUTURE : IT WOULD BE GREAT IF HE ACTUALLY DISLIKED THE DAD FROM WAY BACK WHEN THEY WERE IN SCHOOL TOGETHER & IS NOW USING HIS HYPNOTIC POWER TO CHANGE HIM INTO THE COMPLETE 'FAGGOT' [THE DAD WOULD HAVE PREVIOUSLY HATED]....WOULD LIKE TO SEE HIM EVEN MORE 'CLUELESS' AS HE STARTS TO INTERACT WITH HIS CO WORKERS, BECOMING MORE & MORE 'WEAK WILLED' ADMIRING THE 'REAL MEN' AROUND HIM.....I VERY MUCH LIKED WHEN THE FATHER REALIZED THAT CEDRIC & JASON WERE 'REAL MEN' [ WHICH HE WAS NOW PROGRAMMED TO 'NOT' CONSIDER HIMSELF]...HOPE WE GET A LOT MORE OF THAT ! WOULD LOVE TO SEE JARED LOSE ALL RESPECT FOR SEAN & THE TWO MEN PUT 'HIM' IN HIS PLACE, ETC.....
Anonymous
8/18/16, 11:04 PM
Looking forward to what happens next : let's hope this writer's quick in coming up with the next chapter....
Anonymous
8/18/16, 10:57 PM
Great for a 'first' story. Here's hoping you continue with your writing...Perhaps in the future you'll consider a 'straight to gay' transformation idea & make the central character 'clueless' to his mental changes [?] Personally I also enjoy a slow-change such as for example 'smart to dumb', 'manly to fem. acting', homophobic to very 'out' gay, straight-laced to fowl-speaking, non-smoker to cigar addict, weak looser to muscled leather stud, etc...You get the idea.......Anyway, whatever you write, I'll be looking forward to it !
Aug 16, 2016
8/18/16, 10:24 PM
loved this. I have a real thing about biker sex conversions and this hit all the right buttons for me!
Anonymous
8/18/16, 10:12 PM
Its an interesting introduction. Please don't let the comments stop you from continuing the story! I want to see what develops from the main character's 'experiment'