Recent Comments

JasCo
8/18/16, 12:21 AM
Surely this is not your first story! It's too good!
Anonymous
8/17/16, 11:36 PM
Nice work,very adorable and sweet ,personally i like reading this kind of Romance story(two roommates become lovers) ,rather than reading stories which are full of humiliating,polygyny etc. Keep going😊!
Anonymous
8/17/16, 11:14 PM
Does anyone know what ever happened to the part of the site where the community could write a story like in a wiki...?
Scotty.The.Body
8/17/16, 9:41 PM
This is my first story written for the site after many years of enjoying other people's work. Any feedback or suggestions would be much appreciated! I'm not sure where I am going to go from here, yet.
UchihaDEMS
8/17/16, 7:25 PM
I like the plot! I dont have problem with the grammar so far. I wanna see what happens! Maybe someone else take the pills too? I dunno, maybe some friends who comes to his room to study or perhaps some older man? In any case, those are just personal ideas and you can do whatever you want. This has so much potential, go wild and experiment. This is great :3
Anonymous
8/17/16, 6:07 PM
Another amazing chapter! And thank you for fulfilling my wish for Sean to be a slave! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
8/17/16, 5:32 PM
It's kinda more interesting to read for the story than the hypno/tf stuff at this point. I can sort of imagine Jeffrey could have lasting effects as well just from the "improper" dose, even if less than everyone else. He's a neat character because he's actually kind of realistic in his awkwardness about this new sexuality of his-- not a fetish stereotype like the others (Seth especially). Maybe the biggest twist is that the only lasting effect of any of this is just some greater empathy on everyone's part (Haha. what a bonerkiller a reasonable and positive ending would be. :P)
Aug 16, 2016
Anonymous
8/17/16, 5:32 PM
Good start
Anonymous
8/17/16, 5:26 PM
This is a brilliant start. I agree with many of the posters here...it IS better than some of the ones where English is the author's primary language. Please keep it going!
BenLedew
8/17/16, 9:29 AM
The story is excellent so far - emotions are plausible, and the language is great. I personally find cross-language sex very sexy when it happens in person, so this is little like that. :-)