Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/18/16, 11:04 PM
Looking forward to what happens next : let's hope this writer's quick in coming up with the next chapter....
Anonymous
8/18/16, 10:57 PM
Great for a 'first' story. Here's hoping you continue with your writing...Perhaps in the future you'll consider a 'straight to gay' transformation idea & make the central character 'clueless' to his mental changes [?] Personally I also enjoy a slow-change such as for example 'smart to dumb', 'manly to fem. acting', homophobic to very 'out' gay, straight-laced to fowl-speaking, non-smoker to cigar addict, weak looser to muscled leather stud, etc...You get the idea.......Anyway, whatever you write, I'll be looking forward to it !
Aug 16, 2016
8/18/16, 10:24 PM
loved this. I have a real thing about biker sex conversions and this hit all the right buttons for me!
Anonymous
8/18/16, 10:12 PM
Its an interesting introduction. Please don't let the comments stop you from continuing the story! I want to see what develops from the main character's 'experiment'
An interested fan
8/18/16, 9:40 PM
I just love the way the Dad is becoming less & less of a man ! Hope this continues until he's a complete inferior in every way...Wish he would start to admire his son & wish the son would be hypnotized to also treat his dad as a now total inferior as well..A little bit of 'Bullying' would not be out of the question, especially if the father now felt he deserved it !..I agree with the previous comment, that the dad figure is now in the perfect mind-set to start developing a more 'female' or 'sissy' attitude in the household ?????
Nick Bottom
8/18/16, 9:15 PM
*Tense
Nick Bottom
8/18/16, 9:14 PM
To answer your question, yes, you can write in present text.
Bara
8/18/16, 5:52 PM
Upload one now, we'll be more delighted! Love both of your stories!!
8/18/16, 5:45 PM
Hahaha...that's cuz I'm just reviewing and slightly revising a story that's been written for three years now. :) I felt bad about letting this sit for the few weeks I did, but I got distracted by other projects. I'm going to push and try to get the remaining chapters out as quickly as I can. I don't think it'll be quite one every day, cuz some of them are quite large, but hopefully one every second or third day, at least.
Anonymous
8/18/16, 5:40 PM
Please continue this story:)