Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/17/16, 6:05 AM
Very good story. Can't wait for the next part.
xORRiNx
8/17/16, 5:27 AM
I did make Zach quite attractive didn't I... :P I do want to keep writing about him........ because he was based off of my real life gym crush. haha
Anonymous
8/17/16, 5:16 AM
That would be a great idea!!! Sam could get his revenge by turning Zack completly GAY
Anonymous
8/17/16, 4:48 AM
More!
Anonymous
8/17/16, 4:45 AM
this is actually good! keep it up! its practice that makes it perfect
Anonymous
8/17/16, 3:27 AM
This was good and should definitely be continued... Possibly resulting in giving it to the entire swim team
Anonymous
8/17/16, 3:14 AM
As a brazilian, english isn't my first language too, but you writing is pretty decent. Better than mine, I think.
Nick Bottom
8/17/16, 3:13 AM
Very fine story!!
Aug 16, 2016
Anonymous
8/17/16, 3:10 AM
Oh damn - stupendous as always! You have a brilliant and imaginative mind - and writing that forces one to orgasm. Bravo as always!!!
Aug 16, 2016
Anonymous
8/17/16, 3:04 AM
Yes please continue And I hope both are drawn together