Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/17/16, 1:00 AM
Honestly this story is better than some stories I've read where english WAS the authors first language. lol
Aug 16, 2016
JasCo
8/17/16, 12:04 AM
Yes I plan it to continue.
xORRiNx
8/16/16, 9:59 PM
That would be an interesting plot twist indeed! 😛
SardonicFallen
8/16/16, 9:32 PM
Personally I like that it's not all sex and that there's a sweet plot mixed in. I definately hope there's more and that perhaps the batch was a bit of a bad one so they might only end up mostly turned back but still with some Mariposa traits.
chester
8/16/16, 9:04 PM
I know how difficult it can be for a person whose language is not English. I taught ESL. I loved the story and there are only a few things like tenses that could be changed. I have done that, if you want it. And wouldn't mind helping you any time. You are very talented. Email me at restonronald@yahoo.com if you want it.
BrazilianES_HypnoFan
8/16/16, 8:25 PM
I could imagine a plot twist where Sam, now the Zack's dick, can discover a form of control under Zack using your willpower. He can interupt your piss, let in horny among others mens, block sex with womens, etc... But I think that won't happen.
Anonymous
8/16/16, 7:59 PM
AHHH!!! The short wait for this was too long!! I LOVE your stories orrin 😍😍😍
Aug 16, 2016
Anonymous
8/16/16, 7:20 PM
Very good story! Loved it!
Aug 14, 2016
Nick Bottom
8/16/16, 6:48 PM
Is that why porn stars hold their balls while they're getting fucked?
Anonymous
8/16/16, 6:23 PM
This story turned out to be very different then what it was set up to be. It's definitely an interesting read and well written. I feel it has so much potential to be more erotic though and it's falling flat in that regard.