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xORRiNx
8/16/16, 9:59 PM
That would be an interesting plot twist indeed! 😛
SardonicFallen
8/16/16, 9:32 PM
Personally I like that it's not all sex and that there's a sweet plot mixed in. I definately hope there's more and that perhaps the batch was a bit of a bad one so they might only end up mostly turned back but still with some Mariposa traits.
chester
8/16/16, 9:04 PM
I know how difficult it can be for a person whose language is not English. I taught ESL. I loved the story and there are only a few things like tenses that could be changed. I have done that, if you want it. And wouldn't mind helping you any time. You are very talented. Email me at restonronald@yahoo.com if you want it.
BrazilianES_HypnoFan
8/16/16, 8:25 PM
I could imagine a plot twist where Sam, now the Zack's dick, can discover a form of control under Zack using your willpower. He can interupt your piss, let in horny among others mens, block sex with womens, etc... But I think that won't happen.
Anonymous
8/16/16, 7:59 PM
AHHH!!! The short wait for this was too long!! I LOVE your stories orrin 😍😍😍
Aug 16, 2016
Anonymous
8/16/16, 7:20 PM
Very good story! Loved it!
Aug 14, 2016
Nick Bottom
8/16/16, 6:48 PM
Is that why porn stars hold their balls while they're getting fucked?
Anonymous
8/16/16, 6:23 PM
This story turned out to be very different then what it was set up to be. It's definitely an interesting read and well written. I feel it has so much potential to be more erotic though and it's falling flat in that regard.
Anonymous
8/16/16, 6:17 PM
Not weird at all as a fan of cock tf. Loved the transformation, and the implications for the future use of Sam. Musk was nice, love imagining being his straining smelly cock.Thank you as always!
Aug 16, 2016
Anonymous
8/16/16, 6:09 PM
This feels unfinished. Is it meant to be a series because I don't feel it works well as a one-shot.