I'm having tons of fun finishing this. I think this is the most fun I've had writing... this kink has always invoked a certain excitement for me. Anyway, it's 10:03pm right now... I'm going to the gym now... then I'll tidy it up and post PART 2 absolutely by 3:30am. I have terrible A.D.D. so I get distracted by the simplist of things.

okay my last comment went up twice but you know what this fuckin story is just that radical so fuckin' try me bro I'll fuckin' wreck you I have ABS, like two whole abs.

I don't normally add a preface to the comments that I write, but this is going to be an exception. This comment is very long for a comment, and gets a bit rambly. And loud. You have been warned. Yo yo yo yo! It's been like, a total month since you last posted. Please continue writing this series! It's really good, as in, I never would have expected to see something this rad on *this* website, good. This shenanigan's totally out of left field for me, and I need MOOOOREEEE. I love the demon in particular, some sick hurt/comfort fluff involving him and Stormio would totally be sick as hell. I just love muscular/masculine bottom/sub characters. I get this idea in my head of Bael taking the role of a sort of powersub, like a powerbottom, but more in the way of teasing Storm to Dom him. I know that's not very clear, but it's a pretty weird concept that I've never seen done to a very big extent. You've already got the foundation, with this huge masculine dude going "DOM ME! RAAAAHH TESTOSTERONE!" I just really like that idea, of Bael subbing for Storm, but being in control the entire time, in contrast to the time that he spent enslaved to the less kind masters. Next item: Storm's kingdom is BARELY fortified. This story reads like you've read The Gamer, but seriously, dude, three musclebeasts and a demon does NOT a kingdom make. Plus, if he's a new Fae King, how are there not people trying to take advantage of him yet? People with motivations in various shades of gray totally wanna 'seduce' him to their side. And Bael could totally be a sick advisor, with the Musclebeasts taking flank as Royal Bodyguards. Final point: Yo, he doesn't NEED to learn how to control magic. So far, all of his powers have been intuitive: He could figure them out for himself if he just took some time and practiced. What he NEEDS to learn is civil engineering. Those musclebeasts? Need a full coliseum, complete with roaring crowds. Everyone needs a home, a system of roads are a must, he'll need to figure out not everyone eats (he could get money from tourism revenue originating from the Beast fights, with Bael standing Master of Ceremonies) and he needs to have more citizens. What kind of King doesn't fucking just BUILD the shit out of their population. More peeps=more POWAH, right? Well, he's gonna need that POWAH to defend from all the fuckin' POWAH hungry-ass Raven Kings and shit comin' to cramp his jazzy groove, ya ken? He need a military, and buildings, and systems of laws, and maybe some non-transformed dawgs come to live in his realm because Storm's governing game is just that fcukin' raw. Like, I'm talkin' reasonable taxes, good health care plans, setups to foster the growth of small businesses, a strong system of education, the freedom to create new job positions as new civilians arrive I mean just fuckin' fuck shit up man like don't even hesitate fuckin do it I believe in you. Lol, but really tho. I've seen nothing but positive comments on this shit, and a lot of them. Fuckin' TWENTY on the first chapter alone? You need to fuckin' see this shit through, man. We're all sitting here waiting for you.

The "straight stuff" is mostly incest which is not sexy, just gross and unfortunately ruined the story.

Love this! Especially the slow burn, keep up the good work

I really like how you're exploring this particular kink. I enjoy your writing, and look forward to the next installment.

Now I know how George R.R. Martin feels. No reading ahead! :)

Totally wish this was a reciprocal thing. Like some catty fag turns into a big fat daddy while this happens to a mean bear guy.

I'm off today so I will definitely get it posted before I head to sleep... At 4am

Can't wait for the next part!