[Bare-itone: 30 pts]: Your voice is as dark and low as the panties it drops. [Wrestlemania: 50 pts.] You love to pin muscular men to the ground as they struggle helplessly. [Kabedon: 40 pts] You have an uncanny knack for cornering your sweethearts and kissing them. +20 in conjunction with Bishonen, Onii-chan, or Sempai [Heartthrob: 60 pts.] You have gorgeous features. People around you tend to act shy or flustered. [Lionhearted] Like the knight errant, you are courageous and have a strong sense of justice. You also have a flair for dramatics. [Blueblood]: You are of noble birth. Your fine features, posture and etiquette display proper breeding and upbringing. Others tend to respect and defer to you. (Boosts with Dominant and Assertive-type cards) [Salt-and-Pepper]: You're aging, but your life's not over yet! The touch of silver-gray in your mane drives the younger men wild. (Boosts with Daddy and Manly-type cards) [DIS (pause) HONOR.: 40 pts.]: You have caused a great shame in your past. You must be punished as penance. (Boosts with Asian, Hero, and Nobility cards) [Sexy and You Know It: 60 pts]: Your self-confidence causes others to gravitate towards you. [Guy-ceps: 50 pts.] Your arms are what hold a guy while you're fucking him. They're huge. [Rockin' Everywhere: 50 pts] Yo ass got class. No matter what you're doing, it always seems to move it, move it. [Miss New Booty: 40 pts]: You found her. You're an ass man now, but you only want the single finest ass that you can find in the room. Loyalty not included. [Mesmerizing: 50 pts]: It's no superpower, but you do have gorgeous eyes. Sometimes people find it hard to look away. [It's High Noon: 20 pts]: Well ain't yew a tall glass o' water. Y'talk like a cowboy now, ya hear? [Thundercats, Ho!: 20 pts?]: All of your clothing fits like that of an eighties superhero: Triumphant, but revealing and vaguely homoerotic. [SnapThat: 50 pts.] You love to send your friends pics of whatever you're doing. Or WHOever. [Daddy Dom]: You have a strange paternal aura to you. This charisma tends to draw youthful lads to you. Enthusiastically. [Make It Rain]: You're a one-man party! (Combos with stripper-type cards) [Scared, Potter?: 40 pts.] Congratulations, a whole horde of girls love you... being with another man. Your fanbase has a sizable archive on fanfiction.net. [In All The Right Places]: Everything just seems to sit right on you. EVERYTHING. [F*ckboy: 50 pts]: It's not gay if you don't make eye contact. You swear. [A Slut For Punishment: 60 pts.] Sticks and stones may break you bones, but chains and whips excite you. [Vamp: 50 pts] You have a strange accent, dark allure, and gorgeous pale skin. Also, garlic is disgusting and organized religion is just WRONG. [Kinkbaku: 50 pts] You love the feeling of rope against your skin, and have a knack for getting trussed up in the most insanely complex knots. [The Leash-Holder: No Points]: Everyone with the "collared" property now belongs to you. [Hot-Blooded: 50 pts] You're confident and assertive. If you want something, you make it known. [Ooh, Mister Darcy!: 50 pts.] We ain't sayin' you're a gold digger, but ya ain't playing with no broke... uh... right. [Sensitive Nipples: 50 pts.] You have... sensitive nipples! You can orgasm from nipple stimulation alone. [Poppin' Anotha One: 50 points] You are now multi-orgasmic. Good luck on getting it to stay down.

"Blood pacts are for losers" LMAO "Only wannabes close their eyes while casting" What's next, some dorko comes out like "BEHOLD MY ULTIMATE TECHNIQUE" and Bael just comes out like fuckin' "ULTIMATE TECHNIQUES ARE FOR PUSSIES" and just Demon-kicks the fucker in the balls I'd ducking pay to see that shit.

* And by 'post' i mean 'submit for approval'

I'm having tons of fun finishing this. I think this is the most fun I've had writing... this kink has always invoked a certain excitement for me. Anyway, it's 10:03pm right now... I'm going to the gym now... then I'll tidy it up and post PART 2 absolutely by 3:30am. I have terrible A.D.D. so I get distracted by the simplist of things.

okay my last comment went up twice but you know what this fuckin story is just that radical so fuckin' try me bro I'll fuckin' wreck you I have ABS, like two whole abs.

I don't normally add a preface to the comments that I write, but this is going to be an exception. This comment is very long for a comment, and gets a bit rambly. And loud. You have been warned. Yo yo yo yo! It's been like, a total month since you last posted. Please continue writing this series! It's really good, as in, I never would have expected to see something this rad on *this* website, good. This shenanigan's totally out of left field for me, and I need MOOOOREEEE. I love the demon in particular, some sick hurt/comfort fluff involving him and Stormio would totally be sick as hell. I just love muscular/masculine bottom/sub characters. I get this idea in my head of Bael taking the role of a sort of powersub, like a powerbottom, but more in the way of teasing Storm to Dom him. I know that's not very clear, but it's a pretty weird concept that I've never seen done to a very big extent. You've already got the foundation, with this huge masculine dude going "DOM ME! RAAAAHH TESTOSTERONE!" I just really like that idea, of Bael subbing for Storm, but being in control the entire time, in contrast to the time that he spent enslaved to the less kind masters. Next item: Storm's kingdom is BARELY fortified. This story reads like you've read The Gamer, but seriously, dude, three musclebeasts and a demon does NOT a kingdom make. Plus, if he's a new Fae King, how are there not people trying to take advantage of him yet? People with motivations in various shades of gray totally wanna 'seduce' him to their side. And Bael could totally be a sick advisor, with the Musclebeasts taking flank as Royal Bodyguards. Final point: Yo, he doesn't NEED to learn how to control magic. So far, all of his powers have been intuitive: He could figure them out for himself if he just took some time and practiced. What he NEEDS to learn is civil engineering. Those musclebeasts? Need a full coliseum, complete with roaring crowds. Everyone needs a home, a system of roads are a must, he'll need to figure out not everyone eats (he could get money from tourism revenue originating from the Beast fights, with Bael standing Master of Ceremonies) and he needs to have more citizens. What kind of King doesn't fucking just BUILD the shit out of their population. More peeps=more POWAH, right? Well, he's gonna need that POWAH to defend from all the fuckin' POWAH hungry-ass Raven Kings and shit comin' to cramp his jazzy groove, ya ken? He need a military, and buildings, and systems of laws, and maybe some non-transformed dawgs come to live in his realm because Storm's governing game is just that fcukin' raw. Like, I'm talkin' reasonable taxes, good health care plans, setups to foster the growth of small businesses, a strong system of education, the freedom to create new job positions as new civilians arrive I mean just fuckin' fuck shit up man like don't even hesitate fuckin do it I believe in you. Lol, but really tho. I've seen nothing but positive comments on this shit, and a lot of them. Fuckin' TWENTY on the first chapter alone? You need to fuckin' see this shit through, man. We're all sitting here waiting for you.

The "straight stuff" is mostly incest which is not sexy, just gross and unfortunately ruined the story.

Love this! Especially the slow burn, keep up the good work

I really like how you're exploring this particular kink. I enjoy your writing, and look forward to the next installment.

Now I know how George R.R. Martin feels. No reading ahead! :)