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Null0byte
8/12/16, 3:18 PM
Pretty good story, except for 2 issues: 1. While it's fantastic to imagine a company having that much integrity that they would pay the dude billions of dollars he was rightly entitled to, absolutely no real company would do so. Once they got past the fear of any potential liability issues (which the original story alluded to), they would just shrug their shoulders and go "meh, he's obviously happy where he is, and we can't put his mind back, sucks to be him!" and the greedy dollar signs would turn on. 2. The original story mentioned the fact that the individual at the booth was the inventor, and he didn't exactly come off as dumb. While it *might* be plausible that they corralled Nate into playing the part of inventor, the entire setup comes across as a one-man operation just getting started, not as an established company valued in the billions of dollars and climbing. Having said those things, both stories can really stand in their own light, as being two different takes off the same caption and can easily each go in wildly different directions. All that aside, I loved both! I hope there will be more.
Null0byte
8/12/16, 3:02 PM
Love this story! Loved it on the Male Transformation Blog too! Wish there were more chapters after this one (plan on reading the prequel now)
Anonym0us
8/12/16, 11:49 AM
Great story. Please continue.
Anonymous
8/12/16, 11:38 AM
Finish your drink, Jeffrey!!!!
Anonymous
8/12/16, 11:17 AM
Not so much musk in this one, hope to hear more, but this scene so far is awesome man! Thank you.
HUGE FAN!
8/12/16, 11:06 AM
SO damned happy to see an update on this! Love how Tyler is shaping up, or stinkin' up I should say. Pretty hot to hear how his dick chubbed up another inch while sitting by those girls. Me thinks all thinks this tf should take over the whole school. Can't wait to hear more!
Anonymous
8/12/16, 10:58 AM
It's d'Abruzzo, not d'Abruzzi :D I fucking love your stories
Anonymous
8/12/16, 10:12 AM
Fuccckk yes love this so much!!!#
8/12/16, 10:02 AM
So glad to see another chapter of this. Thank you. And well done on another addition. Really keen to see where this goes.
Anonymous
8/12/16, 4:40 AM
Amazing